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Small facts from the everyday life

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Comment from richie b
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Iza,
Your take on personalities is accurate. Your words
give one much to ponder. The longer we live, the
more people we encounter and and a variety of
personal traits come forth. Your story is interesting,
thank you for sharing.
Peace,
Richie b


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much, and parts of this story is true, in Canada you need a lawyer to declare that person... insane.
Comment from Spitfire
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In some sense we all have multiple personalities according to who we are with or where we are. I've been reading some fiction that deals with children who inherited the schizo or psycho gene. I didn't know it was heredity.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much:) and please forgive my delay
Comment from royowen
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I remember were the granddaughter who self harmed finally lost her life, it was so tragic, the girl was only 18, such a waste, she was pretty, intelligent, had everything going for her. Beautifully written Iza, blessings, RoyTypo wonder how (it) is possible. 2 the one that want(s) to harm others.
3: (in) her in for treatment

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020

Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Iza. Very interesting story here. It is a shame these people cannot be cured somehow short of locking them in places like that.

As I have told you before, you do very well for english being a third language. The biggest problem you are having that I see is switching tenses from past to present and back to past again, all the way through.

Bless you, my friend. : ) Bob

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020

Comment from estory
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This is a sad tale of dealing with mental illness. It's hard for the family too, and you relate that here; it is really hard to make that decision to take away someone's freedom and commit them to an institution, even if it is for their own good. That's why so many people wait until its almost too late to intervene. But the double edged sword is there in this piece; what a tragedy gets multiplied when kids are involved. estory

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is an interesting article, Iza. I enjoyed learning from it. You presented your information well. Your explanations have good examples and is easy to understand. I like that you have factual evidence and you present this in a non-judgmental way. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Schizophrenia definitely needs to be dealt with before it is too late. Every now and then a schizophrenic will turn out with violent schizophrenia and kill.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020

Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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Iza, in spite of the many grammatical errors in this piece, I find it very interesting. The thoughts exposed here, are to think about in earnest. It is not easy stuff, and people with multiple personalities must be helped before it is too late. I agree with you there. These poor souls can do harm and can be dangerous to themselves, but also to others.

A good warning alert. Thank you.
Please go over the piece again with a fine comb and get the little errors out. Your work is worth it.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020

Comment from Lulube
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you've brought about a lot of issues, but I must agree with the claim on multi personalities, for the most part being able to escape through another would be calming to say the least. Only thing is; what is in store upon returning into the picture again?

lulube

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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(one who was so paranoia s/b paranoid) Scary stuff--you capture the torment of mental illness. When you refer to schizophrenia I assume you're talking about the various voices they hear; multiple-personality disorder is a different--very rare--condition. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2020