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Seeking Truth...

A ballad about deception.

22 total reviews 
Comment from Lucy de Welles
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Yes. And one can grow out of the proclivity to fear being deceived, or to be deceived, by the constant knowing of the truth. I John, "but you have an unction from the Holy One, and know all things." Let it be!
Well done!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
    Thanks Lucy, for these super comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from ameen786
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Desires, temptations,etc., are tools that satan uses to exploit mankind; only the weak among us fall prey to it; as long as one wears the apparel of God-consciousness, there's no worries. I thank you for sharing my friend.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thanks so much for these delightful comments and a wise review, blessings Roy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is a warning or admonition style poem. I rather like the line: Watch out with whom you fly. It reminds me that the birds in the neighborhood have had to be more cautious recently due to the presence of an infrequent visitor, a hawk or peregrine falcon. No bird is safe when he/she is around! So that is a good analogy for Satan, as suggested here as well. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thanks Crystie for these wise comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Yes, Satan got Eve by adding one little word , "not". You shall not surely die. And you are right that Eve took us all with her. People never seem to get the power of consequences.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thanks Rebecca, for these excellent comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Satan is incredibly sneaky and we need to very careful who we get our information from. Only God can truly guide us. Our freedom allows us to pray, ourselves, or God's guidance. Again, thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thanks Barbara, for these wise comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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If it sounds too good to be true it probably is. That has always been my rule to live by. They will sell you anything if you think otherwise. Satan has a silver tongue and is a very clever salesman. He knows all the weaknesses of mankind and loves to play his games. Well done, Roy. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thanks Nancy, for these excellent comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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That's the weakness of humans. We fall for false promises if they are attractive enough, even if, in the back of our heads and minds we know the promises might be untrue and false, we still surrender to them. Then, when the sad consequences become manifest, we repent and confess and regret. Thank God for his infinite love for us, for He will pardon, He will set us free, so we can redeem our lives.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thanks Marjon, for these marvellous comments and a splendid review, blessings Roy
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 10-Jul-2020
    Welcome, Roy.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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The ways of Satan are so well camouflaged that it is very difficult to discern truth from lie. We are living in a world right this very moment that takes its energy from lies. The media has 24/7 to fill with reporting and they spin all day to fill those hours. The truth wouldn't fill 1/2 a day. So, your poem is very apt in its premise that lies are prevalent.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thanks, yes you?re absolutely correct, thanks for the beautiful review blessings Roy
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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EXCELLENT poem!
I just wish you would've placed a picture with the poem;-(

Typo: ("defeat,.")
***Remove the ",."

I appreciate and thank you for sharing;-(
May God bless you and your family;-)

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thanks Melodie, for these marvellous comments and a splendid review, blessings Roy
reply by Melodie Michelle on 10-Jul-2020
    ;-)
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thanks
Comment from scongrove
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This is so true my friend :)
It's sad how Eve was so easily deceived. It just shows you how vulnerable we are as humans. Satan seems to have his hooks in several people in this world, telling them lies and drawing them away from God. I pray everyday that they will open their eyes and see the truth.

Thanks for sharing, Roy :)

Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thanks again Shana, this is a wonderful review, bless you Roy