Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, my friend,

Great job with the Pleiades Poetry writing a prompt entry. You followed the rules of the contest well. Title with a single word, seven lines, the first word in each line starts with the same letter as the title. Lovely presentation. Good alliteration of F. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020

Thank you, Gypsy, for the read, review and encouraging comments.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Yup flowers have a way to open up the path to love's heart:"Face of his love graced by a smile -- the dream of this suitor
Future to hold a wonderful life together
Forever..." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020

Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and
presentation.
-A good topic and
and poem that meets
all of the requirements.
-The imagery is good, like
"Face lit by a smile."
-Good concluding lines, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020

Why can't I ever read the directions correctly? Thanks for the heads up and for the read and review. I will edit.

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Jul-2020

I don't know-to make sure we are paying attention?😊 I looked at your poem, and you did a good job. I revised the review.

reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020

Thanks much for taking the time to again review the poem.

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Jul-2020

You are most welcome.