Lovers Embracing Each Other
2-4-2 (lovebirds)4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Lovebirds Embracing Each Other, has the right set up and notes the coupling of two hearts into a happy joining...
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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This 2-4-2, Lovebirds Embracing Each Other, has the right set up and notes the coupling of two hearts into a happy joining...
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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So pleased you liked this short offering Bill!
Comment from mauial
Interesting. Do you know if lovebirds mate for life? I might have to google that. Anyway if that is true, it is very interesting because of what was Godʻs decree for man: That is why a man will leave his father and his mother and he will stick to his wife, and they will become one flesh. (Genesis 2:24) That harmonizes with your poem.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Interesting. Do you know if lovebirds mate for life? I might have to google that. Anyway if that is true, it is very interesting because of what was Godʻs decree for man: That is why a man will leave his father and his mother and he will stick to his wife, and they will become one flesh. (Genesis 2:24) That harmonizes with your poem.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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There are a many animals that do mate for life. We humans sometimes don?t do the same. Hopefully, the couple I portrayed in my verse will be lifetime mates. That first book has the right sentiment. (-: THANKS for your review and comments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Lol - that's a good one!! Great adaptation of a young love story to only eight syllables, mystery author!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Lol - that's a good one!! Great adaptation of a young love story to only eight syllables, mystery author!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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THANKS Yvette!
This one has less syllables than I usually compose. LOL
Comment from Kolbe Brown
After reading such a sweet little poem, found myself w a smirk of smile across my face. We all pray to find our lovebird to make a nest and grow old with.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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After reading such a sweet little poem, found myself w a smirk of smile across my face. We all pray to find our lovebird to make a nest and grow old with.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Hi KB!
I have been married to one for 40+ years so I can feel my smirk (-: THANKS for endorsing my concept.
