Loss of Light
A significance felt down to the soul...19 total reviews
Comment from ameen786
Hello Yvette, congratulations! I hope you're done with your move and feeling well; thank you for sharing another awesome write and no wonder that it's recognised; at my age, the bells are always ringing in my ears...no matter dawn or dusk.....he-he. You take care my friend and enjoy the weekend.
P.S: Regrets for not having a six; but then, your poetry is above and beyond.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Hello Yvette, congratulations! I hope you're done with your move and feeling well; thank you for sharing another awesome write and no wonder that it's recognised; at my age, the bells are always ringing in my ears...no matter dawn or dusk.....he-he. You take care my friend and enjoy the weekend.
P.S: Regrets for not having a six; but then, your poetry is above and beyond.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thanx so much for your wonderful review, Kamran - always great hearing from you over here... hope this finds you starting your week out on a positive note! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Alchera
Seven small big words that reassess immense synaesthesia of perception that lead to infinite horizons and mysterious deep abysses of the human soul. The writing prompt is perfectly written, beautifully set within its syllables 2/3/2 counting and well described throughout its thematic subject narrative story lined content of three lines. Great introspective work Poetess!Congratulations for your winning position which is all well deserved! Tony
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Seven small big words that reassess immense synaesthesia of perception that lead to infinite horizons and mysterious deep abysses of the human soul. The writing prompt is perfectly written, beautifully set within its syllables 2/3/2 counting and well described throughout its thematic subject narrative story lined content of three lines. Great introspective work Poetess!Congratulations for your winning position which is all well deserved! Tony
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you so very much, Tony, for the awesome review and those bright shining stars!! ;) Such a wonderful smile on which to begin my week of cleaning and painting -- thank you!! ;) Here's hoping you have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
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The least I could do for a faithful cultural good friend!
Pay attention to the efforts and tears of these working warm days because of THE WITCH HIT at is tremendous. I also gave you a good title for your next poem, don't you think so? Blessings for the whole week, Yvette. Tony
Comment from Mia Twysted
Silence does happen more at the twilight hours than any other. It seems to be the time that things calm and you can listen to the sound of the world around you.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Silence does happen more at the twilight hours than any other. It seems to be the time that things calm and you can listen to the sound of the world around you.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt.
The lovely picture is a good match.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt.
The lovely picture is a good match.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from jaded831
You are right there, probably why I like that time of day. Strong universal theme, proper syllable count, great picture, the entire package gets a thumbs up. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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You are right there, probably why I like that time of day. Strong universal theme, proper syllable count, great picture, the entire package gets a thumbs up. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Few words here with an ambient theme as the day comes to a close everyone is tired and preparing to sleep and so silence is welcome, never underestimate silence, it is a welcome sound to me, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Few words here with an ambient theme as the day comes to a close everyone is tired and preparing to sleep and so silence is welcome, never underestimate silence, it is a welcome sound to me, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Silence does ring loudest at dusk since there is little to be seen or done as darkness sets in. The world prepares to sleep and rest. It is a comforting time of day.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Silence does ring loudest at dusk since there is little to be seen or done as darkness sets in. The world prepares to sleep and rest. It is a comforting time of day.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-3-2, Loss of Light, has the proper syllabic formatting and notes that loneliness is a void that can only get worse as the long days turn to long nights.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This 2-3-2, Loss of Light, has the proper syllabic formatting and notes that loneliness is a void that can only get worse as the long days turn to long nights.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from lightink
I appreciate the contemplative nature of this little poem.
Great oxymoron 'ringing' VS 'silence'. Great mental image!
Yes, when we lose vision, the lack of things to 'hear' is even more deafening... Beautiful literary and metaphorical meaning!
This is probably the best I read in this category!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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I appreciate the contemplative nature of this little poem.
Great oxymoron 'ringing' VS 'silence'. Great mental image!
Yes, when we lose vision, the lack of things to 'hear' is even more deafening... Beautiful literary and metaphorical meaning!
This is probably the best I read in this category!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from zanya
Yes and dusk is one of the most beautiful times of the entire day - as the bustle of daylight hours begins to hush then we are blessed with this inspiring silence portrayed so eloquently here - use of the verb'ring' is effective
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Yes and dusk is one of the most beautiful times of the entire day - as the bustle of daylight hours begins to hush then we are blessed with this inspiring silence portrayed so eloquently here - use of the verb'ring' is effective
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
