Soar
Open your heart and mind.15 total reviews
Comment from Irene Bratton
This is a great entry for the contest. The image is beautiful and the words are very fitting. The only suggestion I have is to possibly make the font larger? It's so tiny compared to the image that I almost feel like I need to squint to read it. It's just a suggestion. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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This is a great entry for the contest. The image is beautiful and the words are very fitting. The only suggestion I have is to possibly make the font larger? It's so tiny compared to the image that I almost feel like I need to squint to read it. It's just a suggestion. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from mermaids
Excellent use of words that captures the spirit of the United States and of course July fourth holiday. The picture of the eagle is stunning and fits your words perfectly. Excellent use of the 2-3-2 form and best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Excellent use of words that captures the spirit of the United States and of course July fourth holiday. The picture of the eagle is stunning and fits your words perfectly. Excellent use of the 2-3-2 form and best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from SixFtLion (Suzanna)
A lovely short poem. It's not easy to write something substantial in seven syllables, but you did great. It's not easy to open our hearts and minds in this current world situation, but we all have to try, to make the world better. Good luck in your contest!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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A lovely short poem. It's not easy to write something substantial in seven syllables, but you did great. It's not easy to open our hearts and minds in this current world situation, but we all have to try, to make the world better. Good luck in your contest!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Some how the connection between the first two lines is lost in today's madness... Yet, such a wonderful contest offering! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck!
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Some how the connection between the first two lines is lost in today's madness... Yet, such a wonderful contest offering! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck!
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your your encouraging words.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The flag symbolizes and reminds the citizens should soar, protect and promote freedom; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; good luck. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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The flag symbolizes and reminds the citizens should soar, protect and promote freedom; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; good luck. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
