Soar
Open your heart and mind.15 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
What a beautiful commentary on what living in the USA can offer people. No matter our problems, we have it so much better than many other countries/cultures. We are free to express our opinions without free the government will lock us up for an unknown period of time.
Well done. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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What a beautiful commentary on what living in the USA can offer people. No matter our problems, we have it so much better than many other countries/cultures. We are free to express our opinions without free the government will lock us up for an unknown period of time.
Well done. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Beverly A McBride
Very nice illustration. It pretty much says it all. Very timely. Good luck in the contest. This is a difficult form to do well. You have net the requirements. I think it's good timing for this image and sentiment.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Very nice illustration. It pretty much says it all. Very timely. Good luck in the contest. This is a difficult form to do well. You have net the requirements. I think it's good timing for this image and sentiment.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
In only a 2-3-2 syllable poem you expressed clearly what freedom means.
It is NOT "Do whatever you want, and everything is permitted". No. Freedom is asking for an open mind, respect for others, and a loving, open heart. Thank you for this poem.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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In only a 2-3-2 syllable poem you expressed clearly what freedom means.
It is NOT "Do whatever you want, and everything is permitted". No. Freedom is asking for an open mind, respect for others, and a loving, open heart. Thank you for this poem.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Thank you, you got my meaning. Thank you for your great review.
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You are welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-3-2 poem about finding freedom within ourselves is easier when we open our heart with the purpose of finding inner peace that no one can take away from us.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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A very well-written 2-3-2 poem about finding freedom within ourselves is easier when we open our heart with the purpose of finding inner peace that no one can take away from us.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Thanks.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I believe those things, being "mindful" and having an "open heart," have a lot to do with freedom as without them you could not be able to respect that people make different choices from you and its okay.
Very nicely said.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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I believe those things, being "mindful" and having an "open heart," have a lot to do with freedom as without them you could not be able to respect that people make different choices from you and its okay.
Very nicely said.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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You got it and thank you for your review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt.
The lovely picture is a good match.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt.
The lovely picture is a good match.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. The presentation is nice. The connection between lines is good.
I like the freedom topic.
Peace be with you.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend
A fine entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. The presentation is nice. The connection between lines is good.
I like the freedom topic.
Peace be with you.
Gypsy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-3-2, Soar, has the proper syllabic formatting and seems to want the reader to get the spirit that the nation's iconic symbol is able to generate.......
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This 2-3-2, Soar, has the proper syllabic formatting and seems to want the reader to get the spirit that the nation's iconic symbol is able to generate.......
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent vibrant feelings written into this prompt.
In combination with a fine artwork selection you have most successfully written an excellent patriotic piece.
Best of luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Excellent vibrant feelings written into this prompt.
In combination with a fine artwork selection you have most successfully written an excellent patriotic piece.
Best of luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Brandi27
This was a nice poem to show how our country has an open heart for people of every race and color and gives them the freedom and opportunities for a better life.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This was a nice poem to show how our country has an open heart for people of every race and color and gives them the freedom and opportunities for a better life.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review.
