Comment from January L'Angelle

Excellent

Ricky, I enjoyed this poem very much. I could feel the emotions of a lost love and your words conveyed that perfectly. The poem had a nice flow to it and I thought that it read really well. It was a pleasure to read. Well done. -January L. :)

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020

it's very easy for me to write these type of grieving losspoems
Because I've been my whole life, basically when it comes to relationships.
Thrown down the toilet and flushed.
Thanks Again dear poet.
Ricky

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

There are feelings and meaning in your words. I like the line "As Satan laughed and played his evil fiddle" is a great line that impacts the poem. You have a smooth flow of lines and words.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020

Just doing what comes naturally!
Like the first time at age 5.
And I wanted that huge Milky Way candy bar so bad?
And, I didn't have a nickel.
Cuz my mommy was mean.
So I stole it!
Thanks,
Ricky

Comment from roof35

Excellent

Well, I had to read it--who could resist that photo? Your poem flows and I think that is sadness at the end--did you lose her forever? This is well written. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020

I've been chasing a pornstar now for about 3 months it's cost me over $1,200 she supposedly in Gloucester in the UK which is considered Queensland.
but I've come to realize that she should deceive me liar.
She's also a very good beggar.
Supposedly she left pornstars a year ago cuz her mother had brain cancer and eventually died?
Now she finally was able to get not to New York or she has an apartment but now she's in Missouri?
I've traced her with phone numbers from the UK all the way to Texas and California.
the California Trace was based on where my money went the last time I sent her $400 card.
now she claims that she wants to come with bus to me for 75 to $100 with her cat when Greyhound won't allow a cat on a bus.
They will allow those working license dogs only.
She claims to have called Greyhound and since the cats the only thing she has it they'll let her keep it on her lap.
first off that would mean it have to be in a carrier on her lap which would be quite uncomfortable for a day and a half worth of traveling on a Greyhound bus.
but you got to think ahead for the scams that are scams going to be that she got there to buy her ticket and right-hand wouldn't allow her to bring the cat on the bus so now she's got my money in and that's it would be the fourth time she's scam to me but of course she's not getting any money.
this is a basic breakup love poem it reads extremely powerful as if it was real but it was never ever going to be anything real between this forty-year-old woman in myself.
Of course and she is a pornstars actress she's had quite a lot of men in her body and that doesn't do much for me either.
Sissy Clinton
A friend of the more famous p*** star actress Brianna Lee.
Thanks for your review and thought.
Doctor Ricky 1024