The Secret
20 Syllables entry40 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
I love it! And whatsmore I believe it! LOL Good little 20 syllables for any contest, author. One wishes they could hear the rest or at least some more of the successful journey. Bless you and take care.Good luck in the contest. I think ts a winner. : ) Bob
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I love it! And whatsmore I believe it! LOL Good little 20 syllables for any contest, author. One wishes they could hear the rest or at least some more of the successful journey. Bless you and take care.Good luck in the contest. I think ts a winner. : ) Bob
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Susan Larson
This is a hoot! Is that a photograph of you and your wife? We're celebrating 41 years today. I guess I can take this as inspiration to grab some action, huh? Holding tight for 19 more!
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This is a hoot! Is that a photograph of you and your wife? We're celebrating 41 years today. I guess I can take this as inspiration to grab some action, huh? Holding tight for 19 more!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Secret
Hello my friend
Excellent entry for the 20 Syllables writing prompt contest. I think you have a great chance of winning. I love the presentation the picture is perfect for the poem. Good syllable count.
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The Secret
Hello my friend
Excellent entry for the 20 Syllables writing prompt contest. I think you have a great chance of winning. I love the presentation the picture is perfect for the poem. Good syllable count.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
Oh my! this is what I said when I first saw your photo. Then I read your poem which definitely relates to your message. I guess when you been married sixty years, you probably can get away with anything. I hope that was the gentleman's wife that he was holding TIGHT. lol Also, I like the question and answer given in this poem. Too funny. I like your 20 syllables poem alot. Well-done. Happy writing:-)
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Hello,
Oh my! this is what I said when I first saw your photo. Then I read your poem which definitely relates to your message. I guess when you been married sixty years, you probably can get away with anything. I hope that was the gentleman's wife that he was holding TIGHT. lol Also, I like the question and answer given in this poem. Too funny. I like your 20 syllables poem alot. Well-done. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Janet Foor
LOL! What a fun and funny 20 syllable poem and there is a lot of good advice in your secret. Keep on holding tight. :))))
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
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LOL! What a fun and funny 20 syllable poem and there is a lot of good advice in your secret. Keep on holding tight. :))))
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your twenty syllables to paint a lovely picture of long-married success. The artwork surely adds a new, delightful dimension! :-)
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You have made excellent use of your twenty syllables to paint a lovely picture of long-married success. The artwork surely adds a new, delightful dimension! :-)
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Well, I see his face, I'd like to see hers! :) I love seeing couples that are "older" (and that age can really be interesting if you ask my children :) and still holding hands... and other things. Twenty syllables put in the.. right hands, can be very entertaining.
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Well, I see his face, I'd like to see hers! :) I love seeing couples that are "older" (and that age can really be interesting if you ask my children :) and still holding hands... and other things. Twenty syllables put in the.. right hands, can be very entertaining.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from zanya
Yes indeed and who knows what that secret 'recipe' for marital longevity may be - an interesting version of it here & thanks for sharing - lovely pic to illustrate
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Yes indeed and who knows what that secret 'recipe' for marital longevity may be - an interesting version of it here & thanks for sharing - lovely pic to illustrate
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Joker S J
This fantastic! I absolutely love it! You do have to hold on tight in more ways than one :) That picture is so perfect for this poem.
Good luck in the contest!
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This fantastic! I absolutely love it! You do have to hold on tight in more ways than one :) That picture is so perfect for this poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Eternal Muse
The answer may be shown in the picture (lol). It leaves little to the imagination, smile. Is he holding on to her not to fall? Great humor and wit. You've packed volumes in these 20 syllables. This should make for a strong contender and I wish you all the luck.
Love, Y.
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The answer may be shown in the picture (lol). It leaves little to the imagination, smile. Is he holding on to her not to fall? Great humor and wit. You've packed volumes in these 20 syllables. This should make for a strong contender and I wish you all the luck.
Love, Y.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
