The Secret
20 Syllables entry40 total reviews
Comment from DeboraDyess
That's EXACTLY the secret! 'Cause it's too easy to let go, to let other things in and interfere ... Good advice. :)
This is a great 20 syllable poem. I think it will do well in the contest. Good luck there and blessings,
Deb
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That's EXACTLY the secret! 'Cause it's too easy to let go, to let other things in and interfere ... Good advice. :)
This is a great 20 syllable poem. I think it will do well in the contest. Good luck there and blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from Boogienights
Sixty years! Congradulations are in order. You are right about holding on, especially to all the love in your heart. I've been married for 40 years to the best man... I guess we've both been lucky.
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Sixty years! Congradulations are in order. You are right about holding on, especially to all the love in your heart. I've been married for 40 years to the best man... I guess we've both been lucky.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from June Sargent
Well, you've got 9 years on us. We've been married 51 years. And you ate so right. Through all the storms - large and small - that life throws at you, you need to hold onto each other for dear life.
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Well, you've got 9 years on us. We've been married 51 years. And you ate so right. Through all the storms - large and small - that life throws at you, you need to hold onto each other for dear life.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from Ogden
You apparently hit on a way to keep married life fresh for so many years, although it seems that it probably was just doin' what comes naturally. ;o)
Ogden (Don)
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You apparently hit on a way to keep married life fresh for so many years, although it seems that it probably was just doin' what comes naturally. ;o)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from kahpot
Your combination of words and photo are absolutely wonderful, with the double meaning of "hold on tight" very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Your combination of words and photo are absolutely wonderful, with the double meaning of "hold on tight" very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from godlucifer
i always find it interesting to listen to an elderly person. the secret and wisdom they can teach is endless. your poem was truly created with creativity. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
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i always find it interesting to listen to an elderly person. the secret and wisdom they can teach is endless. your poem was truly created with creativity. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from SixFtLion (Suzanna)
Ha ha, love your poem!!! So true on many levels. But the artwork you chose was just perfect and you made me giggle. Congratulations, and good luck in the contest. You have a winner!
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Ha ha, love your poem!!! So true on many levels. But the artwork you chose was just perfect and you made me giggle. Congratulations, and good luck in the contest. You have a winner!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from CPL
Haha! This is fabulous. 60 years! What a great use of 20 syllables and a great picture to go with it! Thank you for sharing your insight in a succinct way. :)
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Haha! This is fabulous. 60 years! What a great use of 20 syllables and a great picture to go with it! Thank you for sharing your insight in a succinct way. :)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from Shell St James
So true! Short and sweet and says it all! I like the fact that it evokes the idea of forever. If everyone just sticks with it, and doesn't give up, love can last forever! Thanks for sharing this inspiring poem!
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So true! Short and sweet and says it all! I like the fact that it evokes the idea of forever. If everyone just sticks with it, and doesn't give up, love can last forever! Thanks for sharing this inspiring poem!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty syllable poem. To make a lifelong relationship work well it is not only holding on tight but also hard work, sacrifices and lots of forgiveness.
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A very well-written twenty syllable poem. To make a lifelong relationship work well it is not only holding on tight but also hard work, sacrifices and lots of forgiveness.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
