The Secret
20 Syllables entry40 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
I just love the picture you have picked to go with this piece. It gives you the mindset to see the poem How it was intended and not as a musky piece would it could be taken as if there were no image presented.
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I just love the picture you have picked to go with this piece. It gives you the mindset to see the poem How it was intended and not as a musky piece would it could be taken as if there were no image presented.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Your picture is so funny and gives a witty note to your poem:"Been married for sixty years
People ask, "What's your secret?"
You gotta hold on tight." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Your picture is so funny and gives a witty note to your poem:"Been married for sixty years
People ask, "What's your secret?"
You gotta hold on tight." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Thanks for sharing!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a cute entry for the 20 Syllable writing prompt.
The picture is a good match.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a cute entry for the 20 Syllable writing prompt.
The picture is a good match.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
Comment from Irene Bratton
This is really cute and it made me laugh. My grandparents were like this and I used to think it was so inappropriate. Now - I know it must've been something really great to last so long. The image and words are a perfect match. Great job and good luck in the contest! :)
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This is really cute and it made me laugh. My grandparents were like this and I used to think it was so inappropriate. Now - I know it must've been something really great to last so long. The image and words are a perfect match. Great job and good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a grand thought for the 20 Syllables writing prompt entry. It is easy to read and understand, and I think it should do well in the contest. Good luck!
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This is a grand thought for the 20 Syllables writing prompt entry. It is easy to read and understand, and I think it should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author this entry will take a prize if the Judges from the CEC. have humor on their mind.
The photo is just perfect if someone doesn't find the fellow in the picture is offensive because he is, holding her behind!
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Dear Author this entry will take a prize if the Judges from the CEC. have humor on their mind.
The photo is just perfect if someone doesn't find the fellow in the picture is offensive because he is, holding her behind!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from richie b
Perfect verse for the above picture. Your poem
is honest and clever. Best wishes in contest.
Peace,
Richie b
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Perfect verse for the above picture. Your poem
is honest and clever. Best wishes in contest.
Peace,
Richie b
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from mermaids
Love this poem, it is full of joy and shows how to hold onto marriage. Excellent use of words and the pic is perfect. Your words created a clear picture in only twenty syllables. Best wishes for the contest.
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Love this poem, it is full of joy and shows how to hold onto marriage. Excellent use of words and the pic is perfect. Your words created a clear picture in only twenty syllables. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from TPAC
Uh, I'm telling! I found this conveyance delightful in content, finding it more moving through illustrated picture capturing its view. All stated in my given view of this tinkling read.
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Uh, I'm telling! I found this conveyance delightful in content, finding it more moving through illustrated picture capturing its view. All stated in my given view of this tinkling read.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
