Comment from RJFunston

Excellent

Good afternoon,
Another post with an easy flow and meaning. I've always thought the rain purified the world, washing away the blood and hate. You have something here, nicely done.
Robert

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for professional review

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Exceptional

Wonderful piece full of hope for the future personified by nature...from which springs our salvation. Follows all the rules well and is a pleasure to read and then sit back and enjoy the meal so to speak.

Regards:

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for superb review with highest rating
fantastic

Comment from mizzkris20

Excellent

I like your 5-7-5 poem. It has a very interesting topic. Rain does not only bring life, unfortunately death as well. I've come across a couple of your poems. Are you planning on publishing them?

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from Perp Ihebom

Excellent

This is a nice piece of writing about the rain and its important position in the affairs of life. 'endow death sleep' is an interesting expression, though not in its finest form. I take it to mean endow death with sleep or something close. well done

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from JM daSilva

Excellent

Life goes on and on despite everything. Despite the fact that life kills. In order to survive you have to kill animals or plants. We are all vampires, even though we think of them as different. But despite its ugliness, life is beautiful as expressed in your poem.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

reply by JM daSilva on 18-Apr-2013

Welcome.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

I like the idea of you making a whole book of poems with different forms a lot. Do you intend to publish it? Thanks for the foot note, somewhat needed. Makes it extra nice.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

With very few words, this poetry paints a beautiful
and natural transition to Spring. The language is
simple which makes it clearly understood. Thank You
for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from seewhatimwritingnow

Exceptional

Interesting 5-7-5 writing. Unique take on 'rain'- as it does not only bring life, but death as well. In hope life goes on. Very beautifully done. Really enjoyed this one. Keep writing. Betty

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for excellent review with highest rating

Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi ALCREATOR LITT RAY D,

A good 5-7-5 poem, it sums up the seasonal hope that comes with the first rains and the new growth.

Well done.

Patrick

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

A profound use of very few words, alcreator. Although I've been a member since 2004, I have never read any of your work. It's a distinct pleasure. Bob (Mastery)

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review