O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Cedar
This one I consider to be a very well written 5-7-5. It could have possibly won a contest, if entered. And, it is also easy to understand. Bill
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This one I consider to be a very well written 5-7-5. It could have possibly won a contest, if entered. And, it is also easy to understand. Bill
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from c_lucas
As we start a new growing season, we await April showers to come our way. Another winter will soon be passing and God will plant his wild flowers. This is very well written.
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As we start a new growing season, we await April showers to come our way. Another winter will soon be passing and God will plant his wild flowers. This is very well written.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Galactia
Sadly so true we all hope there is life after death, if your religous or not. Everyone ponders, no one trully knows until we're gone.
Great job
Regards
tia
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Sadly so true we all hope there is life after death, if your religous or not. Everyone ponders, no one trully knows until we're gone.
Great job
Regards
tia
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a really good 5-7-5, It is a fact of life that rain brings life, nurtures and brings comfort. Without the rain, the planet would die. xsx Sandra
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This is a really good 5-7-5, It is a fact of life that rain brings life, nurtures and brings comfort. Without the rain, the planet would die. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from jaeladarling
Some people curse the rain, but it is essential to many aspects of life. I love it, even the cold stuff, though I don't much like walking in the cold rain. ;) Nice poem!
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Some people curse the rain, but it is essential to many aspects of life. I love it, even the cold stuff, though I don't much like walking in the cold rain. ;) Nice poem!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Allison78
This is a very interesting poem you have written. Life does go on no matter what we go. Baby's are born and people die. Very profound and well written.
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This is a very interesting poem you have written. Life does go on no matter what we go. Baby's are born and people die. Very profound and well written.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from allborn66
This is a very interesting piece. I really enjoyed the Author's Notes and viewing the poem with that in mind. It inspired many thoughts.
Barbara
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This is a very interesting piece. I really enjoyed the Author's Notes and viewing the poem with that in mind. It inspired many thoughts.
Barbara
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from prayingpoet
I "get" the first line: "O rain come singing" In get the first part of the second line "bloom new lives" I do not get the second half of the second line "endow death sweep"
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I "get" the first line: "O rain come singing" In get the first part of the second line "bloom new lives" I do not get the second half of the second line "endow death sweep"
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
You say a lot in 15 words. I can see the rain bringing life to the land and the same rain by its floods bringing death in its wake. Well written, life goes on. Carolyn
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You say a lot in 15 words. I can see the rain bringing life to the land and the same rain by its floods bringing death in its wake. Well written, life goes on. Carolyn
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
Comment from Bill Schott
This is an example of what seems like a simple work, that sends the profound message of renewal and elimination in the process of nature.
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This is an example of what seems like a simple work, that sends the profound message of renewal and elimination in the process of nature.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
