O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from isurp
Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count and I really enjoyed your notes about activation, fruition, and tradition. The last line of your poem is my favorite, "in hope, life goes on. Nicely written. -Steve
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Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count and I really enjoyed your notes about activation, fruition, and tradition. The last line of your poem is my favorite, "in hope, life goes on. Nicely written. -Steve
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Doc Holiday
And life goes on....
The rains can wash away our pain, and help to bring new life forward, even though death will never surrender, we all believe that life will continue...
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And life goes on....
The rains can wash away our pain, and help to bring new life forward, even though death will never surrender, we all believe that life will continue...
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from steevie
The cycle of life is at its best, so ponder not over what you expect, but rather claim your prize and seeks your days of youth. Enter the dragon's den and fear not.
steve
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The cycle of life is at its best, so ponder not over what you expect, but rather claim your prize and seeks your days of youth. Enter the dragon's den and fear not.
steve
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
Comment from Keri353
Love the picture, but then I really enjoy pictures :) Indeed "in hope, life goes on" just maybe not the way we always picture it. Blessings, Keri
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Love the picture, but then I really enjoy pictures :) Indeed "in hope, life goes on" just maybe not the way we always picture it. Blessings, Keri
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thanks for nice review
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You are welcome
Comment from TKField
"Endow death sweep in hope?" What does that mean, exactly? This is not clear. I found the style awkward and confusing. It does have a 5-7-5 structure though, so mission accomplished, I guess.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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"Endow death sweep in hope?" What does that mean, exactly? This is not clear. I found the style awkward and confusing. It does have a 5-7-5 structure though, so mission accomplished, I guess.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thanks for guesswork review...
sorry you never get anything reading my works...
all your reviews made me sick...
please stop reviewing my works...
know you are great and i salute your wisdom...
please stop reviewing my works henceforth...
please escape my works and save me...
hope you will never review my works in future...
Comment from shelley kaye
i love the rain. it's so refreshing. :-)
this was a nice little poem. i like the three phases for each line - never seen that before.
excellent - thank you for sharing :-)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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i love the rain. it's so refreshing. :-)
this was a nice little poem. i like the three phases for each line - never seen that before.
excellent - thank you for sharing :-)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thanks for nice review
Comment from Starlit Ink
I love this 5-7-5 that welcomes the rain to come along singing, to take it's place in the circle of life. This is not only a celebration of rain, it celebrates how rain is needed, although often looked at as unwelcome.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I love this 5-7-5 that welcomes the rain to come along singing, to take it's place in the circle of life. This is not only a celebration of rain, it celebrates how rain is needed, although often looked at as unwelcome.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thanks for excellent review
Comment from rjuselius
"O rain come singing
bloom new lives, endow death sweep
in hope, life goes on"
this reminds me of the movie "singing in the rain". life does go on and hope is the vehicle.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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"O rain come singing
bloom new lives, endow death sweep
in hope, life goes on"
this reminds me of the movie "singing in the rain". life does go on and hope is the vehicle.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thanks for nice review
Comment from G.B. Smith
I'll give you a five for this one as it is not so off the wall. I felt an actual message that was tangible and not so verbose. Keep on keeping on
Bear
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I'll give you a five for this one as it is not so off the wall. I felt an actual message that was tangible and not so verbose. Keep on keeping on
Bear
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thanks for nice review
Comment from hari anand
Another ray of hope your poetry continues following the message and authors note inspirational truly exceptional, loved it too.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Another ray of hope your poetry continues following the message and authors note inspirational truly exceptional, loved it too.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thanks for nice review
