O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Pj Dennison
This is a very interesting poem. The interpretation I get for the words "death sweep" has something to do with new life growing from the previous death that proceeded it. An example would be the leaves that fall dead in the autumn then the new leaves on the tree grow once again in the Spring. Death and life are part of the cycle and "life goes on." Death is swept away by the rain. Rain is an integral part of the new life represented in "blooms" found in the second line. For me, this poem is about the cycle of life. Thank you for sharing your work.
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This is a very interesting poem. The interpretation I get for the words "death sweep" has something to do with new life growing from the previous death that proceeded it. An example would be the leaves that fall dead in the autumn then the new leaves on the tree grow once again in the Spring. Death and life are part of the cycle and "life goes on." Death is swept away by the rain. Rain is an integral part of the new life represented in "blooms" found in the second line. For me, this poem is about the cycle of life. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and
presentation, Al.
-You have used your
15 words well.
-A good topic and
description.
-Good personification
with the rain singing.
-A positive message of hope, too.
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-Good image and
presentation, Al.
-You have used your
15 words well.
-A good topic and
description.
-Good personification
with the rain singing.
-A positive message of hope, too.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from jmdg1954
Lookslike it talks about the cycle of life, although I personally have no clue what "endow death sweep" means or refers to.
Your author notes helped to clarify your 5-7-5, but still puzzled by that line refernced above.
John
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Lookslike it talks about the cycle of life, although I personally have no clue what "endow death sweep" means or refers to.
Your author notes helped to clarify your 5-7-5, but still puzzled by that line refernced above.
John
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from Jaq Cee
"in hope, life goes on"
Great line and so true. For if we have no hope then what do we have? From out of the storm cloud comes the sun. :) Jaq x
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"in hope, life goes on"
Great line and so true. For if we have no hope then what do we have? From out of the storm cloud comes the sun. :) Jaq x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from dannyleonn
Alcreator, you've such talent and insight on creation. Amazing work. Very thought provoking. Loving how this teacher lends a lesson with his poetry. Thank you again!
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Alcreator, you've such talent and insight on creation. Amazing work. Very thought provoking. Loving how this teacher lends a lesson with his poetry. Thank you again!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from EMB
So you have another one featuring rain, but this one is more direct. I'd wager that many farmers have this exact sentiment more than once per year. LOL Very nice.
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So you have another one featuring rain, but this one is more direct. I'd wager that many farmers have this exact sentiment more than once per year. LOL Very nice.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Curt Mongold
What does "endow death sweep mean? Tha is a most nonsensical statement to me, and I can find no correlation between it and the rest of the work. By your lack of grammatical intent, it seems fairly evident that English is NOT your first language. I would suggest perhaps trying it in your native tongue, where it might make more sense.
Curt
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What does "endow death sweep mean? Tha is a most nonsensical statement to me, and I can find no correlation between it and the rest of the work. By your lack of grammatical intent, it seems fairly evident that English is NOT your first language. I would suggest perhaps trying it in your native tongue, where it might make more sense.
Curt
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from amada
Delighted to find this work. I like the thought of nature being God, or God being in nature. I will visit your portfolio as my time allows. :-)
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Delighted to find this work. I like the thought of nature being God, or God being in nature. I will visit your portfolio as my time allows. :-)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from trailblazer101
O rain come singing
Hope of spring
bloom new lives, endow death sweep
Death of winter
in hope, life goes on
Yeah I hope spring gets here soon. It's -30C this AM.
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O rain come singing
Hope of spring
bloom new lives, endow death sweep
Death of winter
in hope, life goes on
Yeah I hope spring gets here soon. It's -30C this AM.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
ah, this at least makes some sense
yet i'm not sure about 'endow death sweep'!
or whether it says anything we don't
already know. there's nothing to prod
the brain.
regards, eph.
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ah, this at least makes some sense
yet i'm not sure about 'endow death sweep'!
or whether it says anything we don't
already know. there's nothing to prod
the brain.
regards, eph.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
