Reception In High Places
5-7-5 Witty animal - being nosey.14 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
That is a helluva picture you chose to accompany your poem, it ties your words altogether. You followed the syllable count to the letter. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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That is a helluva picture you chose to accompany your poem, it ties your words altogether. You followed the syllable count to the letter. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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It's awful, isn't it!!! I couldn't resist using that photo. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from TommyWrites
Well then, I don't know what I was expecting, but it wasn't this!
It's funny, quick, witty, and easy to read. I have to say your picture matches your poem well. I think you have a good chance in the contest, best of luck!
TommyWrites~
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Well then, I don't know what I was expecting, but it wasn't this!
It's funny, quick, witty, and easy to read. I have to say your picture matches your poem well. I think you have a good chance in the contest, best of luck!
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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I saw that picture, and I thought "Do I dare???" It is a terrible subject, but possibly entertaining. Humour is found in the most unlikely places. Thanks for your positive review.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
You adhered to the contest rules and this is a good try! Good luck in the writing prompt contest!
I guess I just don't see a dog sniffing another dogs butt as funny (unless we are in fifth grade), it's just nasty;-(
I would consider using single spaced lines instead of double spaced lines.
Thank you for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you;-)
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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You adhered to the contest rules and this is a good try! Good luck in the writing prompt contest!
I guess I just don't see a dog sniffing another dogs butt as funny (unless we are in fifth grade), it's just nasty;-(
I would consider using single spaced lines instead of double spaced lines.
Thank you for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you;-)
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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I think I must've left my mind behind in 5th grade. I know it is a gross subject; i usually have much more taste than this would signify!!
Thanks for suffering through your review.
(I space out the lines because i have poor eyesight and the words tangle together if the lines are close; maybe others have this issue as well - better to be legible than unclear.)
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Comment from lancellot
Okay, that was something. Dogs, are very witty and interesting creatures. But, I guess it makes sense, they are mostly smell oriented creatures and one never knows what smells good to them. I like the puns too.
Good entry.
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Okay, that was something. Dogs, are very witty and interesting creatures. But, I guess it makes sense, they are mostly smell oriented creatures and one never knows what smells good to them. I like the puns too.
Good entry.
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. I just changed the middle line to make it more poetic:
I'll take a sniff of your whiff
