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Viewing comments for Chapter 73 "St. Louis Chapter 31 part 2"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
19 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was an excellent story, with great descriptive imagery and flow, and a superb use of dialogue. I liked your characters and plot. Adorable set of characters in the end. You have a Hitchcock suspense here you wonder what happens next.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This was an excellent story, with great descriptive imagery and flow, and a superb use of dialogue. I liked your characters and plot. Adorable set of characters in the end. You have a Hitchcock suspense here you wonder what happens next.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from estory
You continue to orchestrate this story of action and intrigue, romance and crime pretty well through this lively dialogue. The best thing about it is that the personality and character of the individuals comes out through it. Nice suspense, good attention to detail. One of the best crime dramas I've read on the site. estory
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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You continue to orchestrate this story of action and intrigue, romance and crime pretty well through this lively dialogue. The best thing about it is that the personality and character of the individuals comes out through it. Nice suspense, good attention to detail. One of the best crime dramas I've read on the site. estory
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from roof35
I am really rooting for Mac to get well and for Megan's murderer to be found--that means this is good writing because you have me hooked. This is very well done.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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I am really rooting for Mac to get well and for Megan's murderer to be found--that means this is good writing because you have me hooked. This is very well done.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
What a well written and creative story that has an excellent story line!
I appreciate and thank you so very much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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What a well written and creative story that has an excellent story line!
I appreciate and thank you so very much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Now you have me thinking when McKenzie is left alone that something else is about to happen. But, I guess, that's how you always keep me coming back to see what happens next. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Now you have me thinking when McKenzie is left alone that something else is about to happen. But, I guess, that's how you always keep me coming back to see what happens next. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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I can promise 'something' will happen. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Poor Mac is still in the hospital and Logan don't want to leave her side. But he must go and attend his sister's funeral and be with his parents, he is throne between Mac safety and well-being and his family. Thank you foe sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Poor Mac is still in the hospital and Logan don't want to leave her side. But he must go and attend his sister's funeral and be with his parents, he is throne between Mac safety and well-being and his family. Thank you foe sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Bednar
A few questions were answered and the hospital room setting and characters within it are believable. It is a bit slow-moving, but not boring - I'm afraid if he leaves something bad will happen...
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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A few questions were answered and the hospital room setting and characters within it are believable. It is a bit slow-moving, but not boring - I'm afraid if he leaves something bad will happen...
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. There are a few problem when he leaves.
Comment from Ben Colder
Seems as if we both have a character that has been though the ringer. Mine is only a cardboard but yours is a permanent picture. Well done Barb, waiting for wedding bells, LOL
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Seems as if we both have a character that has been though the ringer. Mine is only a cardboard but yours is a permanent picture. Well done Barb, waiting for wedding bells, LOL
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. It will be a long while for wedding bells.
Comment from royowen
Mac,s diagnosis hasn't changed, by the look of it. This will take awhile, it doesn't seem right somehow for her to be in this condition. But she's made of stern stuff, some recover better than others. Beautifully written dear you spin a wonderful story, love stories I prefer, well done blessings Roy
Typo : what's Mac(')s diagnosis
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Mac,s diagnosis hasn't changed, by the look of it. This will take awhile, it doesn't seem right somehow for her to be in this condition. But she's made of stern stuff, some recover better than others. Beautifully written dear you spin a wonderful story, love stories I prefer, well done blessings Roy
Typo : what's Mac(')s diagnosis
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review and the catch. I've made the correction.
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Well done
Comment from judiverse
It sounds as if Mac isn't out of the woods yet because of the alcohol poisoning. She isn't able to remember anything about the kidnappers, but she might not be is any condition to be pushed for information. I sense trouble of Logan has to leave, although he is expected to go to services for Meghan. Knowing what happens when he's not around, I'm expecting to go wrong, even though he has backup. I think we're in for a surprise about who's behind the drugs, kidnapping, and murder. Sidney may be involved, but is he the big gun? Great work. judi
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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It sounds as if Mac isn't out of the woods yet because of the alcohol poisoning. She isn't able to remember anything about the kidnappers, but she might not be is any condition to be pushed for information. I sense trouble of Logan has to leave, although he is expected to go to services for Meghan. Knowing what happens when he's not around, I'm expecting to go wrong, even though he has backup. I think we're in for a surprise about who's behind the drugs, kidnapping, and murder. Sidney may be involved, but is he the big gun? Great work. judi
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. There will be a few problems once Logan leaves.
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You're very welcome. I figured there'd be more trouble. I hope Logan's friends can handle it. I'm still thinking the big guy has to be someone Mac knows and trusts. All that's happened to her suggests someone who knows what she's up to all the time. judi
