The Pharaoh Queen
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Burial of a Pharaoh and Ghosts."Hatshepsut - Egypt's Greatest Woman Pharaoh
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Comment from sibhus
This is a very interesting read. Not familiar with this period of history, but your chapter has peaked my interest. It's well written with a good flow, and the dialogue sounds authentic. A good chapter, and thanks for sharing.
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This is a very interesting read. Not familiar with this period of history, but your chapter has peaked my interest. It's well written with a good flow, and the dialogue sounds authentic. A good chapter, and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I love your story. Mythology is one of my common themes, whether Greek, Roman or Egyptian. I'm sure the book was fascinating and I'm sorry to have gotten in on the tail end.
Well written and engaging.
Take care and good luck with the book,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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I love your story. Mythology is one of my common themes, whether Greek, Roman or Egyptian. I'm sure the book was fascinating and I'm sorry to have gotten in on the tail end.
Well written and engaging.
Take care and good luck with the book,
Rhonda
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Hi there Rhonda.
Thank you for your extremely kind and generous review. Gives me a lift, and a feeling of great pride to know you thought the Chapter worth those magical six points.
Love and Regards
Pete.
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I would love to read the entire book, Pete. Let me know when you publish it.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
A worthy ending of this compelling pharaoh epos. It knits together all the loose ends and sees to the deserving burials of the main important characters. Good, there was, in the end, a male child born, to continue the dynasty with Amenhotep.
The most remarkable woman in this whole story was without a doubt Hatshepsut, and I have read the whole epos with pleasure.
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A worthy ending of this compelling pharaoh epos. It knits together all the loose ends and sees to the deserving burials of the main important characters. Good, there was, in the end, a male child born, to continue the dynasty with Amenhotep.
The most remarkable woman in this whole story was without a doubt Hatshepsut, and I have read the whole epos with pleasure.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
Comment from lancellot
Well done. The rights and customs of the ancient Egyptians are fascinating. It is also nice to see that not all shared them, and I like how humans will be humans in any age. In the end, kings, queens or commoners, we are all slaves of our human desires.
Well written.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Well done. The rights and customs of the ancient Egyptians are fascinating. It is also nice to see that not all shared them, and I like how humans will be humans in any age. In the end, kings, queens or commoners, we are all slaves of our human desires.
Well written.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Hi Lancellot
Well, what can I say, except I'm astounded, astonished and overjoyed at both your comments and your very generous six stars.
Many regards Pete
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear thorney, Here I am, privileged to have the opportunity to review your very last chapter. I was fortunate to see many years ago a mini-series on TV that presented the same information that you recite here about Senmut and Hatshepsut. But your addition here adds a whole new dimension to their story! And adds a personal touch to the TV story of her tomb. A story excellently done! Thank you.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Dear thorney, Here I am, privileged to have the opportunity to review your very last chapter. I was fortunate to see many years ago a mini-series on TV that presented the same information that you recite here about Senmut and Hatshepsut. But your addition here adds a whole new dimension to their story! And adds a personal touch to the TV story of her tomb. A story excellently done! Thank you.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Hi there Suzanna
Thank you for your kind review and comments. I don't know if you seen my Author's notes, but I've only written the last eight chapters in the last couple of months. All the other chapters were written over ten years earlier. I just got the urge to finish the tale.
Regards Pete.
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Yes I did read those notes.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Best of luck for publication of the book; I like this final chapter of the publishable book; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Best of luck for publication of the book; I like this final chapter of the publishable book; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
