Silver Dream
5-7-5 contest12 total reviews
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a really fun 5-7-5 poem. I think that you chose your words wisely. There was a lot of thought in this poem... I can see that. I like the alliteration on the first line: "Silvery stars" then "sprinkled" in the middle. That rolled off the tongue really well. Great poem. Great picture too. Really cute! -January L. :)
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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This is a really fun 5-7-5 poem. I think that you chose your words wisely. There was a lot of thought in this poem... I can see that. I like the alliteration on the first line: "Silvery stars" then "sprinkled" in the middle. That rolled off the tongue really well. Great poem. Great picture too. Really cute! -January L. :)
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you
Comment from lancellot
I like this. It is soft and simple, yet has a touch of childhood magic about, where every night's dreams yield endless possibilities. Explains why kid never want to awaken and leave that world.
Very good entry.
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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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I like this. It is soft and simple, yet has a touch of childhood magic about, where every night's dreams yield endless possibilities. Explains why kid never want to awaken and leave that world.
Very good entry.
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thank you
