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Silver Dream

5-7-5 contest

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Comment from Mia Twysted
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A cute little poem that leaves me smiling. To think of the wonderful dreams you have just before you open your eyes. The magic that can happen. Anything is possible.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Sweet pleasant dreams here in your ambient write and this is what we all wish for when we sleep, peaceful slumber with magical dreams, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

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Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt.
This short piece tells a cute story and the artwork is wonderful.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend

A wonderful entry for the
5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is adorable. Cute topic about dreams.

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Silver Dream, has the right set up and pulls the celestial powers from the heavens to enhance the frolicking within the mind of a starry-eyed dreamer........

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Beautiful dream that brings balance into the night - Silvery stars fall,
my dreams sprinkled with delight,
until I awake: Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Delightful and alliterative imagery: silvery stars...sprinkled with delight--earns your stars in itself. Whimsical presentation! Good luck in the contest. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2020

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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You awake after fall of silvery stars in the dream and you sprinkled with delight; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2020

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Comment from roof35
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You followed the rules and wrote a cute poem. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and set the stage for your dreamy words. This is nicely done.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2020

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Comment from Eternal Muse
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A lovely entry in the contest, fantastic picture, I liked the lighthearted feel of it. It is a strong entry, thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2020

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