Slight Bend Led To A Landslide!
Slight Slip Turned Into A Ghastly Landslip!26 total reviews
Comment from sibhus
Ja, nothing quite like getting roofied at your brother's wedding. This is a really interesting piece that makes for a good entry for the contest. It's thoughts are so contempary to our present society. Good stuff and good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Ja, nothing quite like getting roofied at your brother's wedding. This is a really interesting piece that makes for a good entry for the contest. It's thoughts are so contempary to our present society. Good stuff and good luck.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Hi Sibhus,
Thank you very much for your so nice , encouraging comments, and Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry. The allotted space has no 'wiggle room.' Yet, you told a complete little story in 75 words. Your characters are believable, The dialogue is, too. You give readers much to think about. They can use their own imagination to read more into this story. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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You did a great job with your contest entry. The allotted space has no 'wiggle room.' Yet, you told a complete little story in 75 words. Your characters are believable, The dialogue is, too. You give readers much to think about. They can use their own imagination to read more into this story. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Hi Jan,
Thank you very much for your so nice, morale boosting comments, and Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from royowen
When one understands how the ancients lived until now, with women being constantly ground down by proud and arrogant men who misuse their authority! No wonder we are experiencing a backlash, replacing one tyrrany with another, men having their "maleness" stolen. Beautifully written RG. Good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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When one understands how the ancients lived until now, with women being constantly ground down by proud and arrogant men who misuse their authority! No wonder we are experiencing a backlash, replacing one tyrrany with another, men having their "maleness" stolen. Beautifully written RG. Good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Hi Roy,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, and Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Well done
Comment from Cindy Decker
Hi, RP. I really like your chapter, RP. It's clearly about a past place and time. The woman in your story is a little ahead of her time, to say the least. The photo fits perfectly.
Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Hi, RP. I really like your chapter, RP. It's clearly about a past place and time. The woman in your story is a little ahead of her time, to say the least. The photo fits perfectly.
Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Hello Cindy,
Thank you very much for your so nice and encouraging comments backed by Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Karen Estep
Very interesting. The ending is not what I expected! The story is good, and the graphic certainly fits in with the writing. Thank you for sharing. Good work!
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Very interesting. The ending is not what I expected! The story is good, and the graphic certainly fits in with the writing. Thank you for sharing. Good work!
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Too cute, my friend!
75 words and you tell a tale too many people can relate to. Not me, mind you, but others I have known...
Good luck in the contest. You've got a good one.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Too cute, my friend!
75 words and you tell a tale too many people can relate to. Not me, mind you, but others I have known...
Good luck in the contest. You've got a good one.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Hello Rhonda,
Thank you very much for your so nice, lovely, and uplifting words backed by Good Luck Wishes + Most Coveted SIX STARS!
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are most entirely welcome! It was a wonderful story!
