Manatees and Dolphins
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Comment from Lucy de Welles
Creatures of the deep swim in spirit all around me. I have this happen all of the time! Not manatees though .... Whales, dolphins and schools of fish. I find myself right in the middle of them.
Beautiful artwork. You probably created it yourself :). Lovely. Perfect blues in background scheme also.
Well done!
Lucy
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Creatures of the deep swim in spirit all around me. I have this happen all of the time! Not manatees though .... Whales, dolphins and schools of fish. I find myself right in the middle of them.
Beautiful artwork. You probably created it yourself :). Lovely. Perfect blues in background scheme also.
Well done!
Lucy
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Polly Dolly
I enjoyed all the alternate realities explored in this poem - dreams, internet and the ocean. Retreats in the pandemic reality. Love the last line of the poem. I also like the way you broke up the thoughts and sentences - varying line lengths and places to pause. Well done!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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I enjoyed all the alternate realities explored in this poem - dreams, internet and the ocean. Retreats in the pandemic reality. Love the last line of the poem. I also like the way you broke up the thoughts and sentences - varying line lengths and places to pause. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like this poem especial the following sentence: I patiently wait for
a return to a world free from an invisible enemy.
Hopefully with the vaccine available, we can defeat the invisible enemy and back to normal.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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I like this poem especial the following sentence: I patiently wait for
a return to a world free from an invisible enemy.
Hopefully with the vaccine available, we can defeat the invisible enemy and back to normal.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Supe
I see by all the accolades that others have enjoyed this as much as I. Very appropriate in the situation we are in at the moment. This flowed from start to finish. A very enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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I see by all the accolades that others have enjoyed this as much as I. Very appropriate in the situation we are in at the moment. This flowed from start to finish. A very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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you are welcome.
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "in my dreams
or on the internet,
manatees and dolphins
take me to warmth
from cold New England
waters ", because of the transition of the climate compared in this verse and how it made me feel!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Ephesians 6:12 King James Version (KJV)
12 For we wrestle not against flesh and blood, but against principalities, against powers, against the rulers of the darkness of this world, against spiritual wickedness in high places.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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My favorite part was, "in my dreams
or on the internet,
manatees and dolphins
take me to warmth
from cold New England
waters ", because of the transition of the climate compared in this verse and how it made me feel!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Ephesians 6:12 King James Version (KJV)
12 For we wrestle not against flesh and blood, but against principalities, against powers, against the rulers of the darkness of this world, against spiritual wickedness in high places.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Great verse that is important to read and remember. Thank you for reading and enjoying my poem. Elaine
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely peaceful free verse where you combine the covid world we live in with the thoughts of these beautiful creatures, and the happier times that you wait for. Lovely read.
cheers.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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This is a lovely peaceful free verse where you combine the covid world we live in with the thoughts of these beautiful creatures, and the happier times that you wait for. Lovely read.
cheers.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from wishawave
I like warmth showing up in this poem. It is well written and easily to be related.. 'Cold New England waters' might be the area where the authors lives by. For many people live in different area still share the same feeling. A nice poem.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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I like warmth showing up in this poem. It is well written and easily to be related.. 'Cold New England waters' might be the area where the authors lives by. For many people live in different area still share the same feeling. A nice poem.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from AnnieDawn
Your writing sounds like you are a person who loves the sea and its creatures. A well written poem and one I hope you are literally able to enjoy until this pandemic is over. Sea sounds are soothing and I wish you peace and safety. Good luck and great job.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Your writing sounds like you are a person who loves the sea and its creatures. A well written poem and one I hope you are literally able to enjoy until this pandemic is over. Sea sounds are soothing and I wish you peace and safety. Good luck and great job.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
How true to just be free again no worries just swimming through the beautiful blue waters at least I guess we could say at least for these times we are greatful for the internet
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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How true to just be free again no worries just swimming through the beautiful blue waters at least I guess we could say at least for these times we are greatful for the internet
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much. Elaine
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You are very welcome God Bless
Comment from Taurus the Elder
A very good free form poem that rolls easily off the tongue. Very relatable to the current situation we all are in with the epidemic and what we do to find fulfillment in our daily life. Good length not to long not to short. Stayed on topic and had a good solid ending. The art work was spot on.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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A very good free form poem that rolls easily off the tongue. Very relatable to the current situation we all are in with the epidemic and what we do to find fulfillment in our daily life. Good length not to long not to short. Stayed on topic and had a good solid ending. The art work was spot on.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much. Elaine
