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Majestic Flight

Ottava Rime

4 total reviews 
Comment from Sally Law
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A lovely offering for the Fourth of July, dear Susan. I don't think I've ever appreciated our freedoms and constitutional rights more than I do now. A new poetry style to me and always so expertly done.

Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
    Hi Sally! Thank you for the great review! and yes, you are so correct about our freedoms in this country :-)
Comment from WalkerMan
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This well-constructed Ottava Rima about an eagle in flight is timely for the Fourth of July, as the soaring eagle symbolizes the beauty of freedom, which is the primary benefit of America's founding principles.

Superb, gorgeously illustrated, and just what needs to be emphasized today. Sorry I have no Sixes left for this week, so please accept a Virtual Six.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
    Hi Mike! Thank you for taking te time to read and review. You always put so much thought in each review!
reply by WalkerMan on 19-Jul-2020
    You are most welcome, Susan. I like this different way of celebrating our freedom, and your Ottava Rima is just right for the purpose. -- Mike
Comment from January L'Angelle
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I like this poem. There is something very calming about it. The words were chosen very carefully, I can see that clearly. There was a lot of thought that went into this poem. I like this style, Ovatta Rime. I'm going to have to give it a try. Well done. -January L. :)

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
    Thank you for this review! I hope you do try it!..I would love to read it :-)
Comment from lancellot
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This is very good. I like the picture you painted with your poetry and I enjoyed reading different and new styles, especially those that flawlessly carry a theme from beginning to end. I was almost like flying.

Impressive work.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
    Thank you!...I am so pleased you enjoyed this little poem :-)