Making A Friend
Brief and simplistic59 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a beautiful poem about friends and friendship. When we are young many times e move away or our friends do; then we meet new ones. We always hope for a friend that is honest and will forever glow when we need them.
What a beautiful poem about friends and friendship. When we are young many times e move away or our friends do; then we meet new ones. We always hope for a friend that is honest and will forever glow when we need them.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
Comment from estory
Interesting use of this sonnet like form. With this simplified, straightforward language you speak of one of the most valuable things in life; friendship. And one aspect of making friends is communication. We need to share our thoughts if we are to make connections. estory
Interesting use of this sonnet like form. With this simplified, straightforward language you speak of one of the most valuable things in life; friendship. And one aspect of making friends is communication. We need to share our thoughts if we are to make connections. estory
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Melodie Michelle
TOTALLY OUTSTANDING poem that I really adored reading;-)
The poem flowed perfectly and was well written and congratulations on your RECOGNIZED and ALL TIME BEST STATUS!
Bravo!
I appreciate and thank you so very much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
TOTALLY OUTSTANDING poem that I really adored reading;-)
The poem flowed perfectly and was well written and congratulations on your RECOGNIZED and ALL TIME BEST STATUS!
Bravo!
I appreciate and thank you so very much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Pearl Edwards
It is simple isn't it, but sometimes hard to do if you are the one that's struggling. This is a lovely poem about not only being a friend, but accepting friends into your life and letting them know they are appreciated. Nicely said jaybird1
cheers
It is simple isn't it, but sometimes hard to do if you are the one that's struggling. This is a lovely poem about not only being a friend, but accepting friends into your life and letting them know they are appreciated. Nicely said jaybird1
cheers
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from DeboraDyess
Jay, I love this! Your pems are always such inspiration. You spread wisdom like a momma spreads mbutter on toast -- makes everything better. :)
One thought ...
new found >> new-found
Wonderful poem! I love every line.
Be blessed, my sweet FS friend,
Deb
Jay, I love this! Your pems are always such inspiration. You spread wisdom like a momma spreads mbutter on toast -- makes everything better. :)
One thought ...
new found >> new-found
Wonderful poem! I love every line.
Be blessed, my sweet FS friend,
Deb
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Ogden
Whoa! It looks like you're taking a lot for granted from this hypothetical friend.
Hypothetical friends tend to be okay, because you can change your proposition for the hypothesis any time you want.
It's the real ones you can't count on.
Ogden (Don)
Whoa! It looks like you're taking a lot for granted from this hypothetical friend.
Hypothetical friends tend to be okay, because you can change your proposition for the hypothesis any time you want.
It's the real ones you can't count on.
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Nicely done piece about the value of new friends and letting them know your feelings. I have been guilty of not telling someone I liked them until it was too late, so your words make quite the impression on me tonight. Good job!
Nicely done piece about the value of new friends and letting them know your feelings. I have been guilty of not telling someone I liked them until it was too late, so your words make quite the impression on me tonight. Good job!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Teri7
This is a very true and very well written poem about how to catch and hold a potential new friend. You used very good descriptive and true words my friend. I hope you are keeping well. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri
This is a very true and very well written poem about how to catch and hold a potential new friend. You used very good descriptive and true words my friend. I hope you are keeping well. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
Comment from TPAC
Gentle soothing statement with touching elements captivating to my given interests, escape from a norm into a indifference, finding the wording refreshing to spirit. All views stated in my given opinion about this read.
Gentle soothing statement with touching elements captivating to my given interests, escape from a norm into a indifference, finding the wording refreshing to spirit. All views stated in my given opinion about this read.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is a very positive message. It is also so very true. We need to tell people that they make us happy. For this life is not meant to be lived alone, but with others.
This is a very positive message. It is also so very true. We need to tell people that they make us happy. For this life is not meant to be lived alone, but with others.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020