My Adopted Home
oh, how many barriers were overcome36 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Tri-Fall poem you have penned for the potlatch poetry event. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Teri
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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This is a very well written Tri-Fall poem you have penned for the potlatch poetry event. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Teri
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Teri, thanks so much👍
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
My Adopted Home. The first time I read this poem, I didn't like it at all. It doesn't flow very well, I thought the text a bit awkward, and I even thought "tabor" was spelled wrong and had to be tambor. I looked it up, and you were right. (sorry!). When I looked at the description of how this poem had to be written to make a Tri-Fall, I read again.
And I take back what I said before. I still don't like it very much, but you followed the rules as was asked, and did a job worth five stars.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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My Adopted Home. The first time I read this poem, I didn't like it at all. It doesn't flow very well, I thought the text a bit awkward, and I even thought "tabor" was spelled wrong and had to be tambor. I looked it up, and you were right. (sorry!). When I looked at the description of how this poem had to be written to make a Tri-Fall, I read again.
And I take back what I said before. I still don't like it very much, but you followed the rules as was asked, and did a job worth five stars.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Marion yes not my favorite poetic style it piece
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I am so glad with your answer!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
I adored this poem and wow, what a different format that you NAILED and I'm glad you added Author's notes so I understood what you were referring too;-)
Well done and Excellent job!
Thank you for sharing this piece and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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I adored this poem and wow, what a different format that you NAILED and I'm glad you added Author's notes so I understood what you were referring too;-)
Well done and Excellent job!
Thank you for sharing this piece and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your kind comments.
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;-)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A nice description of your feeling and emotion about the members and neighbours about your adopted home; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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A nice description of your feeling and emotion about the members and neighbours about your adopted home; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I did not understand the form as i read it in the club forum, but reading yours, it is very well done according to the notes and the mesmerizing way you wrote it is very well done
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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I did not understand the form as i read it in the club forum, but reading yours, it is very well done according to the notes and the mesmerizing way you wrote it is very well done
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Barb, Jan really went deep into the well in this style. Not that it is all that hard but the flow leaves much to be desired.
Comment from roof35
It seems like you nailed the format for this poem and I appreciate your notes explaining the "skittles" and "tabor." Your illustration pairs perfectly and set the stage for your words. Nicely done.
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It seems like you nailed the format for this poem and I appreciate your notes explaining the "skittles" and "tabor." Your illustration pairs perfectly and set the stage for your words. Nicely done.
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Roff thank you a most unique challenge with this poetic style.
