My Adopted Home
oh, how many barriers were overcome36 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
A good tribute to a country or place that became your adopted home. Great picture and artistic presentation.
So proud I am to be
living here
in a country that offers much
to live most 'oft carefree
a seer.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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A good tribute to a country or place that became your adopted home. Great picture and artistic presentation.
So proud I am to be
living here
in a country that offers much
to live most 'oft carefree
a seer.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A great tribute to the home you praise here and the joy you feel at living there. I feel the same about my home and when set down roots we know we have found our home, I enjoyed the excitement you brought to your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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A great tribute to the home you praise here and the joy you feel at living there. I feel the same about my home and when set down roots we know we have found our home, I enjoyed the excitement you brought to your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Dolly, thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"My Adopted Home", is a well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to reading your next post.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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"My Adopted Home", is a well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to reading your next post.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you my friend.
JLR,
you're very welcome.
God bless, take care keep sharing!
the Duchess
Comment from lyenochka
I think your Tri-Fall is well done (I messed up my rhyme scheme but you followed it well except for "needed" and "acquired" don't rhyme in my pronunciation.) I liked how you show appreciation for the country!
Happy Fourth!
"but trickster's (tricksters) plural
makes me" (make) since the noun is plural
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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I think your Tri-Fall is well done (I messed up my rhyme scheme but you followed it well except for "needed" and "acquired" don't rhyme in my pronunciation.) I liked how you show appreciation for the country!
Happy Fourth!
"but trickster's (tricksters) plural
makes me" (make) since the noun is plural
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Smiling back!
Comment from SixFtLion (Suzanna)
Wow, this is an impressive poem. I am new to poetry and the structure of your poem seem so complicated to me when I read the description. But you make it flow so smoothly and sound like it's easy to write. It shows the high level of your skills. Thank you for inspiring me.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Wow, this is an impressive poem. I am new to poetry and the structure of your poem seem so complicated to me when I read the description. But you make it flow so smoothly and sound like it's easy to write. It shows the high level of your skills. Thank you for inspiring me.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Sixftlion, good luck to your writing
Comment from karenina
You serve up your observations with a hefty side of irony and wit! Very !clever! Not so easy to knock over life's barriers, even for those native born! But then that is your point, isn't it? I substitute tricksters with (most) politicians...all beating their Tabors according to what the latest pools tell them is most advantageous for them to hold on to power. One can be grateful to be living here and still see there is much that needs to be fixed!--Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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You serve up your observations with a hefty side of irony and wit! Very !clever! Not so easy to knock over life's barriers, even for those native born! But then that is your point, isn't it? I substitute tricksters with (most) politicians...all beating their Tabors according to what the latest pools tell them is most advantageous for them to hold on to power. One can be grateful to be living here and still see there is much that needs to be fixed!--Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Your are so very spot on! Thank you.
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Welcome! (smile)--Karenina
Comment from Ben Colder
Where did all the flowers go? Those that bloomed peace and good will toward all mankind. It is for sure lost its way within our society. I find no fault in the wording. Yes Skittles is played in England.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Where did all the flowers go? Those that bloomed peace and good will toward all mankind. It is for sure lost its way within our society. I find no fault in the wording. Yes Skittles is played in England.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thanks Ben!
Comment from ameen786
I thought you were refering to the candy "Skittles"- he-he; definitely a difficult form of poetry, but you seem to have accomplished it with finnesse; excellent rhymes and great flow; thanks for the treat.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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I thought you were refering to the candy "Skittles"- he-he; definitely a difficult form of poetry, but you seem to have accomplished it with finnesse; excellent rhymes and great flow; thanks for the treat.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Ameen thanks much! A nice curve ball with the skittles of which I ate my share of.
Comment from Mastery
H i jim. I do so wish I had six stars left today for you, my friend. Just this opening stanza alone is every bit worthy of one.
"So proud I am to be
living here
in a country that offers much"
Indeed. Thaks for saring. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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H i jim. I do so wish I had six stars left today for you, my friend. Just this opening stanza alone is every bit worthy of one.
"So proud I am to be
living here
in a country that offers much"
Indeed. Thaks for saring. : ) Bob
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thanks dear friend!
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: ) Bob
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
Well said and well timed on this Independence Day! Your words let us know you are not a native of this great land but you have found a home and enjoy the freedoms America offers. Thanks for posting and Happy 4th.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Well said and well timed on this Independence Day! Your words let us know you are not a native of this great land but you have found a home and enjoy the freedoms America offers. Thanks for posting and Happy 4th.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thanks very much!
