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My Bachelor's Degree

5-7-5 Contest Entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from TommyWrites
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Very good poem Dragonskulls!
It's kind of funny too, if you think about it the right way. :)
I wasn't certain what it was going to be about when I clicked on your poem, I wasn't disapointed.
Best of luck in the contest, and good job picking a picture to match it!
TommyWrites~

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Tommy. Yeah, it was meant to be humorous. The contest has been over for a couple days and it didn't do quite as well as I thought it was. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Hope you have a wonderful day. Ron
reply by TommyWrites on 10-Jul-2020
    You're welcome!
    And I'm sorry man, I know the feeling when it doesn't go as you thought it would.
    Tommy~
Comment from Manh C Dang
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Love this, my friend! Some may shun this topic, but I find your writing bold and honest and at times funny (Bachelor's Degree, lol.) Keep writing good stuff! God bless!

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
    Hey, Manh, hi. Thank you for the great review, friend. Yeah, I'm always trying to step over the boundaries on this site. Lol. Little old ladies don't like a lot of my stuff but I do it more for my own enjoyment. All those sunsets, rainbows and happiness don't really cut it for the 'real' world most of the time. I like to throw my twisted humor in there quite often. I'm glad you saw the silliness and equally the depth in this piece. Thank you again, M.

    Have a good one.
    Ron
reply by Manh C Dang on 07-Jul-2020
    You're very welcome, Ron!
Comment from Vanna1
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I do not like the theme, however it is witty and clever wording. Good presentation. I hope it has no truth to it!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
    Thank you, Vanna, for the great review. Yes, this is all just fictitious. lol I appreciate the generous stars. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This write has the basis of truth in the American psyche as guns have ruled and caused much strife, a metaphor for defending the innocent here, a clever write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
    Thank you, Dolly, for the fantastic review and gracious stars. Your comments are spot on and much appreciated. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful weekend.