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Minding mind

5/7/5 poem

4 total reviews 
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for reminding us how long it takes to change habits and beliefs.
I relished your "Caged bird" analogy and the complementary picture. Best wishes in the 5-7-5 competition and enjoy the remains of Independence Day- Joan

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
    Joan my friend, I thank you for the wonderful review; please stay safe.
Comment from lyenochka
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A very profound message in this tiny poem. Humans when "caged" mentally still keep to those invisible boundaries. Great picture to illustrate. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
    Hello my friend and thank you for your wonderful insights; please stay safe.
Comment from Vanna1
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You probably have a point there. It is unnatural how we cage these creatures. I like how you worded it. The way your tone comes across seems to fit the theme.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Hello Vanna, I appreciate your time and am glad to read your wonderful comments; thank you very much; enjoy the weekend.
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
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Well written poetry....A very unique take on "freedom"...The last line of your poem "It is still mured in mind" really struck me....Thanks for sharing!!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Hello Shreyamsi and thank you for your time; glad you like the write.
reply by Saria/Shreyamsi on 03-Jul-2020
    your welcome...