Imaginary People
5-7-5 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What an interesting thought and perfect image to pair with it, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, there is good flow, and you give readers much to think about as to why this happens. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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What an interesting thought and perfect image to pair with it, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, there is good flow, and you give readers much to think about as to why this happens. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from lancellot
Sounds like this may be a case like in the Sixth Sense. A problem for the child, but if it's the mom, then she's found a way to handle it. I'm joking. This is a well crafted 5-7-5. And an original idea.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Sounds like this may be a case like in the Sixth Sense. A problem for the child, but if it's the mom, then she's found a way to handle it. I'm joking. This is a well crafted 5-7-5. And an original idea.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
