Sunrise
Pink clouds decorating a morning sky.3 total reviews
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
This is a good 5-7-5. A haiku, giving me a beautiful image of an early morning. I like the colors used, the pink puffs of the clouds and the contrast of the green trees of the woodlands.
A peaceful sight.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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This is a good 5-7-5. A haiku, giving me a beautiful image of an early morning. I like the colors used, the pink puffs of the clouds and the contrast of the green trees of the woodlands.
A peaceful sight.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thanks much for the read and kind comments.
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Welcome!
Comment from lancellot
Yes, I have to admit, that is a good description of sunrise, and add in a bit of warm breezes, absolutely perfect time to go for a jog and hit the beach. I can this one being a contender in the contest.
Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Yes, I have to admit, that is a good description of sunrise, and add in a bit of warm breezes, absolutely perfect time to go for a jog and hit the beach. I can this one being a contender in the contest.
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thanks for the read and review. Hope you are able to hit the beach.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the effective use
of one continuous thought.
-Vivid imagery that describes
the clouds like "pink cotton candy."
-Effective alliteration and
description of the trees, as well.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the effective use
of one continuous thought.
-Vivid imagery that describes
the clouds like "pink cotton candy."
-Effective alliteration and
description of the trees, as well.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the read and encouraging review.
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You are quite welcome.
