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The M Word

Gordon has a bad day at work

2 total reviews 
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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I like this nicely done story beginning the sentence start the story, nice taletelling and orderly plot development with realistic dialogues, resolved ending; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this, wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Quite the creative and interesting story! I admire the way you went with the
story around the sentencee that started with, "Give me twenty".

Good luck with the contest!

Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you. You too