Shorty Bakes a Porcupine Pie
Short humorous script11 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! :) I've got a life-size picture of this being done in a middle school theater class or presentation -- think they'd have a blast with it! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, Crystie! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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LOL!! :) I've got a life-size picture of this being done in a middle school theater class or presentation -- think they'd have a blast with it! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, Crystie! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you for a kind review, Yvette.
Comment from Janetsue
This is a cute and funny script with a lot of flavor. (Sorry about that!) Truthfully, I love puns and you have excelled at presented some very good ones. Super posting, Crystie!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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This is a cute and funny script with a lot of flavor. (Sorry about that!) Truthfully, I love puns and you have excelled at presented some very good ones. Super posting, Crystie!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your nice review.
Comment from judiverse
This is so funny. I like the idea of Julia Wild out there hawking her cookbook. Good idea to have your passers-by and their take on Julia's cookbook. Of course Shorty has to have his own ideas about cooking, but I don't think the porcupine pie is a workable idea. My mother had enough trouble dressing chickens. John is the perfect foil for Shorty and gives Shorty opportunity for his puns and other humorous comments. judi
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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This is so funny. I like the idea of Julia Wild out there hawking her cookbook. Good idea to have your passers-by and their take on Julia's cookbook. Of course Shorty has to have his own ideas about cooking, but I don't think the porcupine pie is a workable idea. My mother had enough trouble dressing chickens. John is the perfect foil for Shorty and gives Shorty opportunity for his puns and other humorous comments. judi
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Yes, porcupine pie would be difficult at best. This is humor by contrast, of course, and exaggeration. Apple pie sounds so much easier after this, and thanks for reviewing.
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Thank you for your nice review.
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You're welcome. judi
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You're so welcome. I was so glad you brought in Julia Wild. judi
Comment from lancellot
Well, that was a nice little scene. Very friendly and the humor and puns were cute. Shorty, just happens to have it under his hat. The banter between the friends sounded natural, and it was smooth how they included Julia.
Well crafted.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Well, that was a nice little scene. Very friendly and the humor and puns were cute. Shorty, just happens to have it under his hat. The banter between the friends sounded natural, and it was smooth how they included Julia.
Well crafted.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your kind review focusing on the dialogue.
Comment from royowen
No I haven't heard of Julia Child, we had a few of our own, and the odd British chef. Beautifully written Crystie, you've created two brilliant characters in John Shane and Shorty Van... I remember the film "Shane" with Alan Ladd. Loved this comedy script my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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No I haven't heard of Julia Child, we had a few of our own, and the odd British chef. Beautifully written Crystie, you've created two brilliant characters in John Shane and Shorty Van... I remember the film "Shane" with Alan Ladd. Loved this comedy script my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
It's good to see Shorty (and his punderful sense of humor) and John back again ! Thanks for the porcupine pie recipe but I think that Shorty forgot the part about gutting the critter. That would make me want to not make one. Lol.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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It's good to see Shorty (and his punderful sense of humor) and John back again ! Thanks for the porcupine pie recipe but I think that Shorty forgot the part about gutting the critter. That would make me want to not make one. Lol.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Well...I sort of skipped that part in case I ever get a young audience, ha ha. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from forestport12
I like how you set up a John Wayne voice. It helped me with the dialogue and interaction. As always, you have gift to bring characters to life through the rich dialogue. I'm ever fearful that my script will sound wooden and ill-contrived. This encourages me. Yours flows nicely.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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I like how you set up a John Wayne voice. It helped me with the dialogue and interaction. As always, you have gift to bring characters to life through the rich dialogue. I'm ever fearful that my script will sound wooden and ill-contrived. This encourages me. Yours flows nicely.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for a 5-star review! Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Bill Schott
This script, Shorty Bakes a Porcupine Pie, is a super-funny MEAT-ing of the Duke and Julia Child through the baking prowess of Shorty the SHORT cook. Fun to read.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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This script, Shorty Bakes a Porcupine Pie, is a super-funny MEAT-ing of the Duke and Julia Child through the baking prowess of Shorty the SHORT cook. Fun to read.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the super synopsis and stellar review.
Comment from dmt1967
Naw, it has to be rattlesnake pie. That's all I got. (Pulls out rubber snake and waves it ()front of JULIA, who jumps and squeals.) (in) I am not a script expert, which is why I don't review them often, but I think a narrator or direction notes can't have words missing. Might be wrong, though. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Naw, it has to be rattlesnake pie. That's all I got. (Pulls out rubber snake and waves it ()front of JULIA, who jumps and squeals.) (in) I am not a script expert, which is why I don't review them often, but I think a narrator or direction notes can't have words missing. Might be wrong, though. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you for catching that. I was up past midnight writing this and was so tired. Thank you for your row of stars.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a cute and entertaining story, which I enjoyed very much. Shorty's rendition of his recipe is a humorous story all by itself. Well done!
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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This is a cute and entertaining story, which I enjoyed very much. Shorty's rendition of his recipe is a humorous story all by itself. Well done!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your kind review.
