Comment from Melodie Michelle

Good

A nice poem about God! Good luck with the contest;-)
The Shadorma has adhered to the contest rules, however if I had to change a couple of things, one would definitely be the background color! White is so cold and uninviting, especially when the piece is referring to God. One would prefer a warm and inviting color is with a picture that goes with the poem and bringing it all together. Those are two suggestions for your contest entry;-)

Thank you for sharing and may God bless you!-)

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020

Hello Melodie and thank you for your time and excellent suggestion, but I cannot change the background, because the picture was taken from Google images.

reply by Melodie Michelle on 03-Jul-2020

No not the picture background, the background behind the picture. There is one for the background and one for the font color.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Man is forsaken because he turned his back to God. This time resembles early Isreal when they kept turning to other gods. What a wonderfully written poem and that picture is frightening. I wish I had a six.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020

I agree my friend, thank you for sharing your wonderful insights and God bless you.

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

This is so sad. It is just awful that living creatures, any living creature, is so in need. Have we been left behind? Have we done wrong? How do we make it better?

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020

Hello friend, I appreciate your time and the kind insights; thank you very much.