Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

This is an intense chapter as Jace tries to figure out who captured him and struggles to control the beast. Maybe Dr. Crane has bitten off more than he can deal with. I hope that is true and that Jace escapes.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020

Thank you, w.j.debi :)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Yes, Jace maybe Dr. Crane's worse nightmare before it's over. His beast is fierce.
Thanks for taking the time to read my chapter. I appreciate your kind words.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from cdefan

Excellent

Another tense action scene that kept my attention from the beginning to the end. I think Dr. Crane is going to feel Jace's wrath before long. Looking forward to reading that chapter.

Great writing!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020

Thanks so much! :)

Yes, I maybe thinking you are right about this Dr. Crane. But you never know. He has many enemies.

Thanks again my friend!
Hugs! Stay safe!
Shana )

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Great chapter with intense action scenes. It looks like Dr. Crane has messed with the wrong guy. I think Jace's beast is more than he bargained for.
I see a big battle scene coming soon. Looking forward to reading more.

Nate

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020

Thanks Nate ;)

Glad you enjoyed the action. And yes... Dr. Crane is messing with the wrong species. Between the Breedline and Jace's Beast, he is going to find out he can't push everyone around. LOL!

Thanks so much!
Stay safe,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I'll bet it it felt good to Jace, it certainly felt good, (it's funny how one can get involved with the characters and vicariously feel the emotions of the characters) this is a wonderful piece of writing Shana, why? Because you are a wonderful writer. It's so good to get a close up of the characters, well done my friend, blessings, Roy
Typo : Neo-Na(t)zi

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020

Thanks so much, Roy :)

Glad you enjoyed the part with Jace. Poor guy has been through the ringer. I always look forward to your opinion. You make me feel more confident and you always encourage me. You're the best!
Thanks for catching my typo. :)

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 02-Jul-2020

Well done dear girl.

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

I'm so glad Jace was able to get out of his restraints. I just hope he can take care of the rest and save Tesse. Your story is well-written, interesting, very engaging start to finish. I felt like I was there. I was in to the story I forget to look for mistakes so I went read it for a second time, oh what hardship, lol, just kidding, I didn't find a thing. Great job as always.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

So glad you liked the story. Jace has been through the ringer, but I believe he will always survive just about anything as long as he has Tessa by his side. His determination and strength drives him to do anything for her, especially since she's going to have his twin sons.

Thanks so much for all your motivating words. It makes a difference.

Stay safe & have a great fourth!
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

Such heart rendering scenes filled with both action and emotion. This chapter not only drew me into it, but it also kept me there with each and every proceeding word. It did not disappoint.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

I was hoping this chapter would captivate the reader with Jace's determination to save his beloved. Hearing your review gives me such motivation to keep rewriting this story to make it better. It's definitely been trying. I will be so glad to get my first four books redone. I see so many mistakes. Yikes!

Thanks again! Hope you have a great fourth!

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 02-Jul-2020

Hope you have a safe and happy fourth. I really love reading this story with its wide array of characters.
Hugs,
Faye

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Sometimes you shouldn't barging for more than you can eat: 'When the Beast turned to look, he saw the bearded man reach for his whip. Fueled with anger, Jace's beast charged at the speed of lightning with broken chains dangling from his wrists. He sent them slicing through the air, giving Heinrich a taste of his own medicine. The force of the impact knocked him off balance and shattered his torso. As he toppled over in agony, the Beast threw his head back and howled in triumph." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020

Thank you, Iza :)

The scene you mentioned was fun to write. It took some time to write that small paragraph. I try to visualize everything as I create it. Seeing it in your mind is easy, but putting it into words is another.

Thanks again!
Hope your fourth is great!

Sincerely,
Shana :)