I Stuck With It
Glad I did28 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I can relate to this one both the glasses forever needing cleaning, and the book that sometimes you want to give up on but "I'll just read a few more chapters" then it gets you in. Nicely told in your Roger's Refrain Yvonne,
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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I can relate to this one both the glasses forever needing cleaning, and the book that sometimes you want to give up on but "I'll just read a few more chapters" then it gets you in. Nicely told in your Roger's Refrain Yvonne,
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thanks. There has been only one book I didn't finish, and I can't even remember the title.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Oh my goodness -- sounds like an afternoon around here BEFORE all these %$#%@^ packing boxes began to sprout up - lol!! ;) Love the rhythm and feel to this one, Yvonne -- makes it even that more relatable, my lady!! ;) Thanx for sharing that talented pen in your RR! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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LOL!! Oh my goodness -- sounds like an afternoon around here BEFORE all these %$#%@^ packing boxes began to sprout up - lol!! ;) Love the rhythm and feel to this one, Yvonne -- makes it even that more relatable, my lady!! ;) Thanx for sharing that talented pen in your RR! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Oh, I sympathize with you. There's nothing worse than having to downsize. I did it for my mother, and then two years ago, had to go through all the stuff again, deciding what to keep. Hand in there. It will be over with soon. Take a break. It will be there when you're ready. 8-)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Glad I did
I Stuck With It
by damommy
Hello, my friend,
I like your poem. It has a really nice rhyme and meter. Perseverance is a great quality to have. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Glad I did
I Stuck With It
by damommy
Hello, my friend,
I like your poem. It has a really nice rhyme and meter. Perseverance is a great quality to have. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you. There has only been one book that I never finished, and I can't recall its title. 8-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Roger's Refrain. We often give up reading a boom when it doesn't start well and draw our attention to read more. If we out down the book we may never discover the surprises later in the book.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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A very well-written Roger's Refrain. We often give up reading a boom when it doesn't start well and draw our attention to read more. If we out down the book we may never discover the surprises later in the book.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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So true. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Ulla
I know the feeling very well. Normally I would put it to aside and not bother with it, but then it happens just as you say. You persevere and find it was worth the effort. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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I know the feeling very well. Normally I would put it to aside and not bother with it, but then it happens just as you say. You persevere and find it was worth the effort. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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There's only one book in my whole life I didn't finish, and now, I can't remember the title. Thanks for reviewing.
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Oh, I've come across a few books I just couldn't read. They may have been written very well, for all I know, but I couldn't read them.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, clear and creative. I found the poem
flows and connects well. The reader pondered on the theme of this poem
and thought about always giving something I am doubting a chance.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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The author's words are interesting, clear and creative. I found the poem
flows and connects well. The reader pondered on the theme of this poem
and thought about always giving something I am doubting a chance.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Lobber
Ah! How many excellent books have we started than put down because "The story wasn't good at first. The author didn't seem well versed,..."
- Lobber
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Ah! How many excellent books have we started than put down because "The story wasn't good at first. The author didn't seem well versed,..."
- Lobber
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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I've only had one book I didn't finish in my whole life. If the first page doesn't grab me, I'm done. Thanks for reviewing.
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what was the book?
and why?
- Lobber
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I don't remember the title anymore. I read almost all of it before I finally gave up. 8-)
Comment from Ben Colder
Your poem is right on for most I would think. Sort of like writing your name and reading it when it is cold. LOL.
thanks for sharing your lovely poem. Seems fitting to me.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Your poem is right on for most I would think. Sort of like writing your name and reading it when it is cold. LOL.
thanks for sharing your lovely poem. Seems fitting to me.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated.
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More than welcome.
Comment from Pantygynt
Your excellent iambics make the monorhyming bearable as the rhythm drives it along. The thematic repetition in the last line of each verse is an excellent idea, presumably your own since it is not mentioned in your note as being a feature of the form.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Your excellent iambics make the monorhyming bearable as the rhythm drives it along. The thematic repetition in the last line of each verse is an excellent idea, presumably your own since it is not mentioned in your note as being a feature of the form.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Jim. This means a lot to me.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Notes are appreciated.
-You did a very good job with this form.
-Good rhyme, meter, and repeating phrases.
-I flowed well from verse to verse.
-I like the topic you chose, too.
-You certainly came up with a lot
of obstacles after you lost your book.
-I like this line:
"The author didn't seem well versed."
-A good concluding couplet,too,
-I enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Notes are appreciated.
-You did a very good job with this form.
-Good rhyme, meter, and repeating phrases.
-I flowed well from verse to verse.
-I like the topic you chose, too.
-You certainly came up with a lot
of obstacles after you lost your book.
-I like this line:
"The author didn't seem well versed."
-A good concluding couplet,too,
-I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you did. It just popped in my head. 8-)
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You are welcome.
