Trees talk
5/7/5 poem8 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
The tree of life. That is what this piece shows. They show us with time that we can start again. Not quite the same but just as beautiful,
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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The tree of life. That is what this piece shows. They show us with time that we can start again. Not quite the same but just as beautiful,
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Hello Mia, I am pleased that you like the poem, thank you very much.
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
I've always believed that trees have eyes, and now I'll be listening for their voices as well. A beautiful haiku and beautiful artwork. Good entry for the contest... ...ec
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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I've always believed that trees have eyes, and now I'll be listening for their voices as well. A beautiful haiku and beautiful artwork. Good entry for the contest... ...ec
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Hello Elaine and thank you for your wonderful review.
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You're welcome... ...ec
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the 5-7-5 tree-hugger contest
Trees can bend with the wind, change with the seasons,
provide shade in the sun and are simply beautiful.
Excellent photo and poem.
Best wishes to you
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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This is an excellent entry for the 5-7-5 tree-hugger contest
Trees can bend with the wind, change with the seasons,
provide shade in the sun and are simply beautiful.
Excellent photo and poem.
Best wishes to you
Robert
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Hello Robert, I thank you for your wonderful insights.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Life lesson taught through the eyes of a tree, beautiful metaphor hank you for sharing and good luck with the contest "Trees teach life lessons,
even in death, they're showy -"
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Life lesson taught through the eyes of a tree, beautiful metaphor hank you for sharing and good luck with the contest "Trees teach life lessons,
even in death, they're showy -"
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Hello Iza, I appreciate your visit and am pleased to read your wonderful comments; thank you very much.
Comment from Matthew Guy
I believe i got the underlying message behind that. How trees show that death might be an illusion, or that in perceived death their is still a purpose. Either way i liked it!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I believe i got the underlying message behind that. How trees show that death might be an illusion, or that in perceived death their is still a purpose. Either way i liked it!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Hello Matthew and thank you for the time and review.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Great image to showcase the poem. To me, "life lessons" would make more sense than "lives lesson." I like the analogy to being showy before death. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Great image to showcase the poem. To me, "life lessons" would make more sense than "lives lesson." I like the analogy to being showy before death. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Hello Darlene and thank you for visiting and your wonderful suggestion, I'll make that change; appreciate it very much.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
wow!! excellent!! great job!! awesome!!! thanks soooo much for sharing this!!!!! it is really very good and beautiful!!! great job!! keep writing!!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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wow!! excellent!! great job!! awesome!!! thanks soooo much for sharing this!!!!! it is really very good and beautiful!!! great job!! keep writing!!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Hello there and thank you for visiting; appreciate your time and am glad that you like the write.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the description.
-An interesting view of trees.
-I guess they do have a lot
to teach, especially because
they are usually around a long time.
-They also have beautiful colors
in the autumn.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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-Nice image.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the description.
-An interesting view of trees.
-I guess they do have a lot
to teach, especially because
they are usually around a long time.
-They also have beautiful colors
in the autumn.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Hello Pam and thank you for your time and the wonderful review; I appreciate that.
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You are quite welcome.
