Let go and just Breathe
Peace8 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
You didn't have to but you chose to write a very somber Haiku. It is well crafted. Kudos. The structure and feel of nature and it's interaction with people is real. It can calm us, if we just let go and embrace it.
A good entry.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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You didn't have to but you chose to write a very somber Haiku. It is well crafted. Kudos. The structure and feel of nature and it's interaction with people is real. It can calm us, if we just let go and embrace it.
A good entry.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Hope you had a great 4th of July Weekend!
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
Very nice. A great reminder to slow down, take a breath and enjoy the sensations provided by nature. The pic you chose enhances the poem nicely. Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Very nice. A great reminder to slow down, take a breath and enjoy the sensations provided by nature. The pic you chose enhances the poem nicely. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much for the excellent review and your lovely comments.
Hope you had a great 4th of July Weekend!
Comment from roof35
I like your green post. This is well written and fresh. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. This is very nicely done.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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I like your green post. This is well written and fresh. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. This is very nicely done.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much for the excellent review and your lovely comments.
Hope you had a great 4th of July Weekend!....Maria
Comment from Sally Law
I've been spending more and more time outdoors and enjoying the shore. It's beautiful this year. I loved your poem and the green offering of the forest.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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I've been spending more and more time outdoors and enjoying the shore. It's beautiful this year. I loved your poem and the green offering of the forest.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and your lovely comments. I am so glad you are spending more time outside and enjoying the shore.
May you and your family stay well and safe ....Maria
Comment from Gloria ....
Nicely written and presented, Harmony. I find the forest peaceful as well, and you have written a lovely thought about that.
Best of luck to you with the voters and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Nicely written and presented, Harmony. I find the forest peaceful as well, and you have written a lovely thought about that.
Best of luck to you with the voters and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and your lovely comments. Hope you are doing well.....Maria
Comment from patcelaw
How often do we forget to just take a deep bresth when we are in such a lovely spot as this? I wonder if we all took some time to stop and breath that many of our problems would disappear.
Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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How often do we forget to just take a deep bresth when we are in such a lovely spot as this? I wonder if we all took some time to stop and breath that many of our problems would disappear.
Patricia
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and your lovely comments. Hope you are doing well.....Maria
Comment from Cybertron1986
A simple and accepting remembrance of what is still good and attainable during these confusing and troubled times. I like how you related the color green with life. It's easy to forget there is beauty in the nature's simple gifts. Beautiful write.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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A simple and accepting remembrance of what is still good and attainable during these confusing and troubled times. I like how you related the color green with life. It's easy to forget there is beauty in the nature's simple gifts. Beautiful write.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and your exceptional comments. May you be well and safe.....Maria
Comment from Wabigoon
Harmony--
My, maybe, unfortunate first response to your poem is to George Floyd and his inability to breathe. That is not what you are about. Still. Green symbolizes lots of things. Thanks from the thoughts.
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Harmony--
My, maybe, unfortunate first response to your poem is to George Floyd and his inability to breathe. That is not what you are about. Still. Green symbolizes lots of things. Thanks from the thoughts.
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and your interesting comments. May you be well and safe.....Maria
