By The Sea
Nonet for the Nines46 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very nice nonet. I like the way it is displayed. I love the beach too. It's been too long since I've been there but I love everything about the experience except getting a bad burn.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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This is a very nice nonet. I like the way it is displayed. I love the beach too. It's been too long since I've been there but I love everything about the experience except getting a bad burn.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you, dear Beth. I'm glad you enjoyed by sea-imspired poem. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from mermaids
This is a lovely nonet. I admire your rhyming of words and there is a smooth feel to your poetic form, like the smoothness of the sea. Reading your words makes me want to go to the beach. I also like the mention of flip flops. You have created a fun poem that paints the perfect picture of being at the beach. Your descriptive use of words adds to the strength of your theme.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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This is a lovely nonet. I admire your rhyming of words and there is a smooth feel to your poetic form, like the smoothness of the sea. Reading your words makes me want to go to the beach. I also like the mention of flip flops. You have created a fun poem that paints the perfect picture of being at the beach. Your descriptive use of words adds to the strength of your theme.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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It is always good to hear from a mermaid about the sea! Thanks so much for the sunny review of my poem. Sending you my best today from Florida,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet about the pleasures we can enjoy on the beach where water dance around your bare feet and ankles while walking on the beach.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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A very well-written Nonet about the pleasures we can enjoy on the beach where water dance around your bare feet and ankles while walking on the beach.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Sandra dear. I'm so glad you enjoyed my Nonet. Sending you my sunny best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Sankey
This was lovely. Well done. Nice rhyme, too. Not sure where that beach is? Definitely not in Australia! Sand is a bit dark. Line not long enough for FS. Grrr. No spags.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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This was lovely. Well done. Nice rhyme, too. Not sure where that beach is? Definitely not in Australia! Sand is a bit dark. Line not long enough for FS. Grrr. No spags.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you, dear Geoff. I am starry-eyed and blessed from head to toe! Thank you so much!! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your rhyming nonet, Sal. Hope you are enjoying the soothing sounds of the ocean. I liked your creative rhymes of the "crops" and "flip-flops." And of course, love that rendition by Iz.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Loved your rhyming nonet, Sal. Hope you are enjoying the soothing sounds of the ocean. I liked your creative rhymes of the "crops" and "flip-flops." And of course, love that rendition by Iz.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. We live in flip-flops at home and on the beach. It puts us in the seaside mood. Sending you my Florida best today as a,ways,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine nonet here Sally and you brought the essence of the shore lapping the gentle waves over our bare feet and everyone is enjoying the sunshine in their tank tops, very atmospheric, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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A fine nonet here Sally and you brought the essence of the shore lapping the gentle waves over our bare feet and everyone is enjoying the sunshine in their tank tops, very atmospheric, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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I'm so glad to send you so,e abundant sunshine, Dolly dear. I hope you get a chance to find some sea and salt this summer, too.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Janetsue
I share your delight in being at the beach; and long ago, my house was across the street from one. Your posting caused me to feel nostalgic and I appreciate that as I can remember so many good times. Thank you for sharing this lovely nonet, my dear poetic friend! Smiles, Janet
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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I share your delight in being at the beach; and long ago, my house was across the street from one. Your posting caused me to feel nostalgic and I appreciate that as I can remember so many good times. Thank you for sharing this lovely nonet, my dear poetic friend! Smiles, Janet
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and kind comments, dear one. It is so appreciated and needed. Sending you my best today from the sunny shore,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sally. Your nonet poem meets the style standard. I don't do beaches. I've never enjoyed the ocean that much. I go to the mountains. I would stay there if I could.
If you like IZ's music, listen to his version of "What A Wonderful World."
PAL Z ð???
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Hello Sally. Your nonet poem meets the style standard. I don't do beaches. I've never enjoyed the ocean that much. I go to the mountains. I would stay there if I could.
If you like IZ's music, listen to his version of "What A Wonderful World."
PAL Z ð???
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you, dear Z. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. This particular song by Israel is a combination of 'Somewhere Over the Rainbow' and 'What a Wonderful World.' I love them both so this rendition was perfect. Sending you my best today as always
Sally xo
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You're welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
This nonet tells us that you can be contemplative by the oceatn if you can ignore the sounds of the others on the beach and the squacks of sea birds.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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This nonet tells us that you can be contemplative by the oceatn if you can ignore the sounds of the others on the beach and the squacks of sea birds.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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I will always keep writing. Thanks for the lovely review and kind comments.
Sal xoxo
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You are most kindly welcome, Sal.
Joan
Comment from royowen
Where do you live Sally, near the coast or inland? We are within 30 minutes of the coast, my wife and little ones, are beach lovers, being fair, I've got to keep out of the sun, a beautifully written Nonet Sally, I'd forgotten about the nonets. Well done, I love this reminder of summer, bless you, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Where do you live Sally, near the coast or inland? We are within 30 minutes of the coast, my wife and little ones, are beach lovers, being fair, I've got to keep out of the sun, a beautifully written Nonet Sally, I'd forgotten about the nonets. Well done, I love this reminder of summer, bless you, Roy
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, dear Roy. I so appreciate your kind review and comments. Sending you my best today as always
Sal xo
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Always a privilege
