By The Sea
Nonet for the Nines46 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hi Sal :)
I really enjoyed reading your nonet.
I would love to spend some time by the sea right now. Your poem brought it to me!
Best wishes as always,
Debra
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Hi Sal :)
I really enjoyed reading your nonet.
I would love to spend some time by the sea right now. Your poem brought it to me!
Best wishes as always,
Debra
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Shut up!!!!!!!!!! Is it my Debra?? I am delighted to see you dear girl. How are you? I've missed you so much. Now my days are brightening. So glad to see you and I appreciate the womderful reciew and reconnection. Sending you and your my nest as always,
Sal xoxoxo!!!
Comment from estory
I thought the poem got stronger and stronger and the end was my favorite part as this kite sails away on the breeze with the sky opening wider and wider endlessly. It really speaks of the power of the human spirit, the power of hope, that springs eternal in the breast and carries over the raging sea estory
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I thought the poem got stronger and stronger and the end was my favorite part as this kite sails away on the breeze with the sky opening wider and wider endlessly. It really speaks of the power of the human spirit, the power of hope, that springs eternal in the breast and carries over the raging sea estory
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much for your kind review of my poem. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from Loren .
A truly beautiful and tranquil post. Makawiwo'ou is one of my favorite Hawaiian performers. Especially this rendition of Over the Rainbow . I understand he has passed away, but he's left us with this treasure.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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A truly beautiful and tranquil post. Makawiwo'ou is one of my favorite Hawaiian performers. Especially this rendition of Over the Rainbow . I understand he has passed away, but he's left us with this treasure.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Ah, I'm so glad you liked this and the song. Thank you so much for the kind review. It is so appreciated. Sending my best today as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Sally,
My energy level is very low and I won't be spending much time on F.S., but I did want to pop in and tell you how lovely this posting is. I hate to put a damper on the mood you set, but I kept thinking about how folks are crowding on the beach, unmasked. We're living in strange times, my dear.
Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Hi Sally,
My energy level is very low and I won't be spending much time on F.S., but I did want to pop in and tell you how lovely this posting is. I hate to put a damper on the mood you set, but I kept thinking about how folks are crowding on the beach, unmasked. We're living in strange times, my dear.
Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I'm sorry you're not feeling well. will pray for you, dear Lou. Yes, times are changing and the main reason for my refocus-on-something-good-poem. I'm so glad you stopped by.
Sending my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Bill Pinder
Sally, I like this poem inspired by your time of relaxing at the beach. You definitely expressed some peaceful thoughts in a creative way. Glad you could enjoy a break. Bill
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Sally, I like this poem inspired by your time of relaxing at the beach. You definitely expressed some peaceful thoughts in a creative way. Glad you could enjoy a break. Bill
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thank you Bill. I'm so glad you stopped by to check out my Nonet for the Nines. I hope you'll try one, too. We did have a nice vacation and it seem to come in just the right time. Sending my best today as always, Sally ;)
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Excellent! Hopefully you are safe and allowed to BE by the sea. This flows and reminds me of the waves coming in gently. Absolutely lovely! I need to get to water sometime this summer, but as things are, it may not happen! Lovely. A definite sixer Nonet!
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Excellent! Hopefully you are safe and allowed to BE by the sea. This flows and reminds me of the waves coming in gently. Absolutely lovely! I need to get to water sometime this summer, but as things are, it may not happen! Lovely. A definite sixer Nonet!
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you, dear one. I feel so special. There are so many to award sixes to and you pick me. How kind you are and generous with praise and stars. I hope some salt and sunshine made its way to you today. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxoxoxoxoxo
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It is lovely here today and I'm writing! :)
Wendy
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
I love an ocean beach, just walking along ankle-deep. The waves wash away time.
I like the rhymes in your nonet, "sea/me, flops/crops, flight/kite.
I like the way you describe how the experience lifts your spirit,
"Like a bright kite
Jetting towards
Pale blue
Skies"
Nicely penned!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Hi Sally,
I love an ocean beach, just walking along ankle-deep. The waves wash away time.
I like the rhymes in your nonet, "sea/me, flops/crops, flight/kite.
I like the way you describe how the experience lifts your spirit,
"Like a bright kite
Jetting towards
Pale blue
Skies"
Nicely penned!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Excuse me... and just where have you been? Shock therapy must work for you. I've missed you, Kimbob. So glad you could stop by and catch the waves and clear blue skies.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
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Hi Sally, Since mid-March I've been writing poems for our local historian, David Goss. He has a Walks 'n Talks program in the Saint John area... though most of them have been cancelled for 2020. He also asked me to write the foreword for his new book, which was launched last Saturday at Loyalist Coins & Collectibles. He the foreword in poetic form. I called it "Saint John: Home Sweet Home". I will be posting these poems over the next few weeks in Fanstory. It's nice to be missed! Thanks for that!
Kimbob
Comment from Patty Palmer
I love to be by the sea, the ocean, the lake, the river, the swimming pool; puddle in the driveway.... LOL I enjoyed your poem. All of the things you would see at the beach! Have a great night!
Patty
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I love to be by the sea, the ocean, the lake, the river, the swimming pool; puddle in the driveway.... LOL I enjoyed your poem. All of the things you would see at the beach! Have a great night!
Patty
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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You're like me. I love the water... anywhere. Thanks so much for stopping by today and for the great review, Patty dear. Sending you my best today from Florida,
Sal xoxo
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Well hello to Florida from Pennsylvania Stay safe1
Patty
Comment from harmony13
The words of this poem are calming, clear and creative. Thank you for
the video - the music was lovely. The poem flows and connects well.
Sally, the poem was very uplifting - thank you. Thank you also for
the author's notes - they compliment this poem.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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The words of this poem are calming, clear and creative. Thank you for
the video - the music was lovely. The poem flows and connects well.
Sally, the poem was very uplifting - thank you. Thank you also for
the author's notes - they compliment this poem.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Dear Maria, thank you for the lovely review and kind words. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Blessings Sally. I enjoyed your Nonet of Nines, By the Sea. So many feelings and observations of the beach in just a few syllables, ending with a leap into the sky toward pale blue skies. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Blessings Sally. I enjoyed your Nonet of Nines, By the Sea. So many feelings and observations of the beach in just a few syllables, ending with a leap into the sky toward pale blue skies. Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Dear Frank, thanks so much for the marvelous review and kind comments. It is so appreciated. Fanning you right now! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
