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Firefighter

Love triumphs

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Such a beautiful poem:"A spark of hatred
fueled will intensify,
only to be extinguished
by a loving heart." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
    Thank you for your beautiful words.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello anonymous

Beautiful entry for the Naani writing prompt contest. I love the presentation. Good syllable and line count.

A nice thought if kindness.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
    Thank so much.
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
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Well said. Thanks for the reminder that it only takes a spark to light a fire. A word or a look, the spreading of a falsehood can cause a lot of damage but conversely, true expression of love can extinguish it quickly.
Thanks for the reminder.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
    Thanks so much for your encouraging words.
Comment from Diana Kane
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I absolutely love the message here. It's the truth. Just left me with a feel good mindset. In this day and age that's no easy task. Great job! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
    Thank you for your wonderful review
Comment from roof35
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You followed the rules and said a lot in a few words. Your illustration, of course, pairs beautifully with your poem. This is a very nicely done work.

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
    Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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This poem was true to it's word by the last line.
"only to be extinguished
by a loving heart."
That fireman was the extinguisher with his loving heart that he did those duties. Awesome!

I appreciate you sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
    God bless you and your family as well. Thank you for your wonderful review.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 28-Jun-2020
    ;-)