When Skies Cry
Thunder Pierced A Cloud13 total reviews
Comment from Ogden
It had to be lightning that pierced the cloud. Thunder can be scary, too, but it's only lots of noise. (Otherwise, your poem is lovely, with its metaphors and optimism.)
:)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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It had to be lightning that pierced the cloud. Thunder can be scary, too, but it's only lots of noise. (Otherwise, your poem is lovely, with its metaphors and optimism.)
:)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hi Don,
Thank you for your very thoughtful and unique comments on
this, sincerely appreciated. Glad you shared your optimism
and objectivity so insightfully. Take care, have a great week.
Best wishes, Ronni
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You're very welcome, Ronni.
You have a special week, too.
Don
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A scenic description is so literally depicted the thunder is piercing clouds and making Nature soothingly changeable with colour and peace; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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A scenic description is so literally depicted the thunder is piercing clouds and making Nature soothingly changeable with colour and peace; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you friend, for enjoying this read, and sharing your kind
appreciations, thoughts compliments. My pleasure to share and
so pleased you enjoyed the read. Take care. God Bless!
Best wishes, Ronni
Comment from Earthlover
This poem really pops! Love the style of poetry with each section ending with one word for a unique visual impact. Very soothing and delightful to read this style of poetry. The color purple that surrounds your image and words really compliments the overall effect of this poem.
Love it...
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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This poem really pops! Love the style of poetry with each section ending with one word for a unique visual impact. Very soothing and delightful to read this style of poetry. The color purple that surrounds your image and words really compliments the overall effect of this poem.
Love it...
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hi Earthlover,
Thank you for your enthusiastic and appreciative comments on
this, truly pleased you enjoyed this presentation! Is what we
poets most aspire for---a joyful read and pleasure abounding!
So touched you loved it, and your thoughtful compliments.
Have a fantastic week....
Best wishes, Ronni
