When Skies Cry
Thunder Pierced A Cloud13 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
You made the natural cycle of the storm so beautiful, dear Ronni. Renewal never sounded so good. Your finest poetry so far, I think, and descriptions so rich, I could smell the rain.
Sending you my best today as always, and six stars to brighten your day.
Sal xoxoxos.............
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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You made the natural cycle of the storm so beautiful, dear Ronni. Renewal never sounded so good. Your finest poetry so far, I think, and descriptions so rich, I could smell the rain.
Sending you my best today as always, and six stars to brighten your day.
Sal xoxoxos.............
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thanks again dear, means all the more when you especially
enjoy! Love always, Ronni
Comment from Ric Myworld
A lonely rose, enticed to bloom by hope, the main ingredient to keep us all moving toward tomorrow. You caught my attention with your quote about heading for the bar-b-que. Faith the better choice. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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A lonely rose, enticed to bloom by hope, the main ingredient to keep us all moving toward tomorrow. You caught my attention with your quote about heading for the bar-b-que. Faith the better choice. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Hi Ric,
Thank you for your insightful comment on the rose narrative and
its intended inspiration. You aced it so perfectly in that one sentence!
The 'bar b que' quote referred to, was a bit flippant and
not as humorous as impulsively spun out. I agree with you,
'Faith' is much better choice and desired inspiration.
Thanks for your unique and especially appreciated reviews
of these particular poems in Portfolio. Wonderful surprise!
Best wishes, with gratitude always, Ronni
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a lovely turning of the human heart's emotions reflecting in nature... if only we could experience the emotions with awe rather than the pain they sometimes bring! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing, my beautiful friend -- so much of the rain around here these days... and the sun seems to intensify the heaviness, ya know?... Hope this finds you well -- so far behind but I promise to answer your personal message later this evening, just trying to find a footing as I'm SOOOO far behind!
Take care til then -- miss you!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Such a lovely turning of the human heart's emotions reflecting in nature... if only we could experience the emotions with awe rather than the pain they sometimes bring! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing, my beautiful friend -- so much of the rain around here these days... and the sun seems to intensify the heaviness, ya know?... Hope this finds you well -- so far behind but I promise to answer your personal message later this evening, just trying to find a footing as I'm SOOOO far behind!
Take care til then -- miss you!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Hello dear Yvette,
So right you are in your real world comments and reflections dear,
agree with you 100%. Yet there is benefit to storms, nature's and
our own inner storms too, as we eventually come to reconcile.
All for a reason, a higher source has discretion over.
Doing fine, don't worry about being behind, just take it in
stride, and don't overwhelm yourself over any tardiness.
I am most often tardy too! Take care of you!!!!
Love, blessings always!!!!! Ronni
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Rain means different things to people and some are relieved by it after a long drought and some are fed up with the repeated drizzle. Here you describe it as a frenzied cry from the heavens, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Rain means different things to people and some are relieved by it after a long drought and some are fed up with the repeated drizzle. Here you describe it as a frenzied cry from the heavens, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hi dear Dolly,
So right you are dear, in your reflective thoughts and comments
and so pleased you enjoyed this one and shared so appreciably!
Love, blessings, Ronni
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
There is a lot of nice imagery in this poem because of all of the descriptive words. I liked reading this poem. Thanks for sharing this with us. I like poems that make me imagine things.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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There is a lot of nice imagery in this poem because of all of the descriptive words. I liked reading this poem. Thanks for sharing this with us. I like poems that make me imagine things.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hi Amanda,
I am so pleased you liked and enjoyed reading this poem, and
all the more so in that it was the kind of poem that enticed
you to imagine things, that is a very terrific effect and inspiration..
so by all means go for it....kick start your imagination and soar!
Best wishes, Ronni
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
When Skies Cry
by Ronni
Hello, Ronni,
Beautiful imagery. I really like the frenzied bolt
zapped with an annoyed grin.... :) The presentation is beautiful too. Great job my friend.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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When Skies Cry
by Ronni
Hello, Ronni,
Beautiful imagery. I really like the frenzied bolt
zapped with an annoyed grin.... :) The presentation is beautiful too. Great job my friend.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hi dear Gypsy Blue Rose,
Thank you dear, for your most thoughtful and appreciative
comments and compliments on this! Sincerely appreciated!
A little different experiment for me, so glad you liked the
imagery as presented, and great to have you peek in again!
Blessings, best wishes always, Ronni
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your abundant use of personification and focus on "Hope," "Love," and "Peace". Your title and artwork selection established the mood perfectly. Have a restful weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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I admired your abundant use of personification and focus on "Hope," "Love," and "Peace". Your title and artwork selection established the mood perfectly. Have a restful weekend- Joan
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hi Joan,
Thank you for your appreciations of the personifications of
presentation and its overall theme, tone, mood and artwork.
So pleased you enjoyed. You too, have a great weekend
and Happy 4th of July! Stay safe and enjoy your leisure time.
Hugs, Ronni
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Thanks for reminding me about the 4th of July. I'll just be sheltering in place, but hopefully it will be sunny. Be safe and well- Joan
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yes, there are TWO thunder storms simultaneously raging. Like so many others, I'm wondering when they will subside, allowing the rainbow to appear! Only God knows . . . Your poem is lovely--well-written and vividly descriptive.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Yes, there are TWO thunder storms simultaneously raging. Like so many others, I'm wondering when they will subside, allowing the rainbow to appear! Only God knows . . . Your poem is lovely--well-written and vividly descriptive.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hi Janice,
Thank you for your insightful thoughts and comments and
reflections on this one, sincerely appreciated, and glad you
enjoyed the read. Take care, have a fun week!
Best wishes, Ronni
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent free verse with that classy feel of ambiguity and a touch of the cryptic. But the narrative is beyond my tiny brain. But I do admire the lovely Language, well done, Ronni, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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This is an excellent free verse with that classy feel of ambiguity and a touch of the cryptic. But the narrative is beyond my tiny brain. But I do admire the lovely Language, well done, Ronni, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hi dear Roy,
This was an experimental contrast between nature and human
nature effect during storms, and appreciate your gracious
comments and compliments despite a little vagueness. Your
thoughts and candid reflections are always appreciated!
Blessings, Ronni
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Well done
Comment from Ricky1024
Love and nature works well with this piece Ronnie.
This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
(But a need for tissues)
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The Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and have a Blessed weekend.
Ricky
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Love and nature works well with this piece Ronnie.
This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
(But a need for tissues)
...
The Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and have a Blessed weekend.
Ricky
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hi Ricky,
Thank you for a most precise, insightful and appreciative range of compliments and appreciations on this poem! Pleased you enjoyed
and shared such kind reflections. Take care...
Best wishes, Ronni
