Scene at a Time Portal 3
one scene script with Pons and Ned16 total reviews
Comment from damommy
Hahahaha. Of course, Ned would have such a thing happen to him in his own dream. I like the way he made the letter P silent. Just like him. He's a hoot!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hahahaha. Of course, Ned would have such a thing happen to him in his own dream. I like the way he made the letter P silent. Just like him. He's a hoot!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Yvonne. Ned has his moments.
Comment from nomi338
How mena of Ned to allow Pons to get drenched by some Jurrasic pee and poop, or is that ee and oop. (Silent Ps) I guess that if it is my dream and you are there as a guest, you are the one who is going to get dumped on. Makes perfect sense to me.
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How mena of Ned to allow Pons to get drenched by some Jurrasic pee and poop, or is that ee and oop. (Silent Ps) I guess that if it is my dream and you are there as a guest, you are the one who is going to get dumped on. Makes perfect sense to me.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Dreams are for sharing.
Comment from Mistydawn
That's one way to get revenge on someone, lol. Your script is well-written, very interesting, funny, imaginative. I look forward to reading more.
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That's one way to get revenge on someone, lol. Your script is well-written, very interesting, funny, imaginative. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thanks, MD
Comment from royowen
Gee, Pons and Ned with a device sounds a bit dangerous Bill. Our intellectual giants are out on in another adventure, this time with a time device that takes them into the Jurassic era. A great script again, you want to put these together in skit form? Well done, excellent job, Bill. Blessings,
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Gee, Pons and Ned with a device sounds a bit dangerous Bill. Our intellectual giants are out on in another adventure, this time with a time device that takes them into the Jurassic era. A great script again, you want to put these together in skit form? Well done, excellent job, Bill. Blessings,
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Roy
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Well done
Comment from lyenochka
The future where Pons can get sterilized by lasers, right? I'm confused that Ned can here Pons' corrections in his dream. Pons must be rubbing off on him unconsciously. "bucket a terrytackle poop " (shouldn't that be 'oop' ?) ð???
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The future where Pons can get sterilized by lasers, right? I'm confused that Ned can here Pons' corrections in his dream. Pons must be rubbing off on him unconsciously. "bucket a terrytackle poop " (shouldn't that be 'oop' ?) ð???
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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It?s terrytackle turd now.
Comment from roof35
Well, this made me chuckle especially when Pons got ooped on. It took some imagination to write this but it also did a little teaching. My grandchildren would love it. Nicely done.
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Well, this made me chuckle especially when Pons got ooped on. It took some imagination to write this but it also did a little teaching. My grandchildren would love it. Nicely done.
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you, roof
