Prayer For a Changed Heart
The closer I walk with Jesus, the more I want to be like him8 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a truthful, yet interesting entry for the Spiritual Poem writing prompt. It should do well in this contest. I wish you the best of luck!
Typo:
Next to the last stanza, second line "you're should be your)
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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This is a truthful, yet interesting entry for the Spiritual Poem writing prompt. It should do well in this contest. I wish you the best of luck!
Typo:
Next to the last stanza, second line "you're should be your)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review and rating, and thank you as well for the heads up. I dread making those kinds of mistakes, but they do happen. God bless you:)
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We all make mistakes and don't see them...
Comment from pharp
Mystery Poet,
This is such a beautifully penned poem prayer requesting the Lord to create love in your heart. It is a very sincere prayer of repentance from a heart of stone. This prayer really touched my heart. May God forever keep you in His loving care. The very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Mystery Poet,
This is such a beautifully penned poem prayer requesting the Lord to create love in your heart. It is a very sincere prayer of repentance from a heart of stone. This prayer really touched my heart. May God forever keep you in His loving care. The very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Blessings, and thank you so much for your insightful review and excellent rating.
Comment from Edward Escobar
When it comes to our mighty Lord I am spiritually moved in hearing the hearts of those who write about his greatness, that everlasting fellowship He seeks in us always. Great work
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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When it comes to our mighty Lord I am spiritually moved in hearing the hearts of those who write about his greatness, that everlasting fellowship He seeks in us always. Great work
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Blessings Edward and thank you for your excellent review and rating. So true, he is worthy of all praise.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Wonderful! Inspirational! You pray to Lord to change your heart to make you like Lord as you are prepared to give Lord everything; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this and wish you good luck in the Contest. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Wonderful! Inspirational! You pray to Lord to change your heart to make you like Lord as you are prepared to give Lord everything; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this and wish you good luck in the Contest. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Blessings and thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words, and your excellent review and rating.
Comment from roof35
This is certainly a spiritual poem and very inspiring. Your faith comes shining through. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. It is very nicely done.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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This is certainly a spiritual poem and very inspiring. Your faith comes shining through. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. It is very nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Blessings and thank your you for your excellent review and rating. I am glad you said my faith shines through, that is after all what I want my readers to see and respond to. God bless you and than you.
Comment from RodG
This spiritual poem conveys in simple language what it means to be a newborn Christian: to accept Jesus and to let Him truly change you into a better person. Nicely done! Rod
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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This spiritual poem conveys in simple language what it means to be a newborn Christian: to accept Jesus and to let Him truly change you into a better person. Nicely done! Rod
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Blessings Rod and thank you for your excellent review and rating. I am glad you got the Gospel message and I pray others do as well.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
If I could give you six stars I would, unfortunately all I'm able to give you is five stars;-)
Exceptional job!
If I were to change one thing it would be the background color to make it more inviting and warm. The white makes it feel cold and uninviting.
Thank you so much for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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If I could give you six stars I would, unfortunately all I'm able to give you is five stars;-)
Exceptional job!
If I were to change one thing it would be the background color to make it more inviting and warm. The white makes it feel cold and uninviting.
Thank you so much for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Blessings Melodie and thank you for your excellent review and rating. I Will look into your suggestion on the background.
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;-)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Life takes back and forth between faith and lost of our believes, but in the end we come back to what we first knew :"Not my will but your own oh, Lord
Take from me this heart of stone
And give me a heart of love my Lord, today" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Life takes back and forth between faith and lost of our believes, but in the end we come back to what we first knew :"Not my will but your own oh, Lord
Take from me this heart of stone
And give me a heart of love my Lord, today" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Blessings Iza and thank you for your excellent review and insightful comments.
