Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This thirty-syllable poem, Oops!, has the proper syllable count and takes issue with the meteorologists who now have millions of dollars worth of equipment backing up the wrong forecast.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020

Thanks for your review. You'd think with all that they'd be a little more accurate!!
Geoff

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

I like your red color for this cartoon verse. POTUS used a Sharpie to define his (hurricane) weather. Unfortunately (IMHO), we did not kick him out the front door for his crazy prediction.

Good luck in the voting.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. I had to look up the meaning of POTUS and IMHO. Not up with the texting lingo, showing my age lol

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt contest. Good syllable count but the connection between lines doesn't flow.. it's kind of funny.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Ha, ha, ha, this is the best entry for this contest. You got my vote 'This storm's not called for

Throw the weather guy

Out the front door" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020

Thanks for the very positive review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Very cute. I'm sure that the weather guy gets lots unfriendly mail. I enjoyed your rhyming story and complaint about the poor weather forecasting. I might suggest even "Out the front door" to show he's being booted out. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

The weathermen don't always get it right! But they are getting much better at predicting and forecasting and we always need someone to blame for rain, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. I sometimes wonder if they are getting better!!

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Wickedly clever--a real treat. You may get a prize with this wit and whimsy. It's disappointing indeed when a sunny day turns out the reverse. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This is a fun little post. I is humorous and made me smile. The picture goes very well with the words. It is a fitting entry for the contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of your thirty syllables in this amusing, descriptive poem about one of the most maligned people, of who are NOT criminals.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Funny how they are just SO SURE what the weather will be 20+ years from now but they just cannot seem to get it straight one day or one week from now... not even close!! :) :) This is a great offering for the contest - best of luck at the polls! ;)

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Sometimes I just wish I had the minds eye of a weatherman..NOT!!