Open Your Eyes... and Question
And Don't. Ever. Stop.21 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
This is so true! Nothing ages us as fast as the refusal to look with wonder at life. We cannot allow ourselves to lose interest in the world around us. Curiosity keeps the mind alive and well. Thank you for the reminder in this short piece. The artwork is perfect.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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This is so true! Nothing ages us as fast as the refusal to look with wonder at life. We cannot allow ourselves to lose interest in the world around us. Curiosity keeps the mind alive and well. Thank you for the reminder in this short piece. The artwork is perfect.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Many thanks for your awesome and encouraging review, and may you have a wonderful Wednesday!
Comment from Mark Schardine
Wonder
is but the first step on life's journey t'ward
Wisdom
We experience wonder at the beauty of our world, then develop the discipline needed to gain wisdom.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Wonder
is but the first step on life's journey t'ward
Wisdom
We experience wonder at the beauty of our world, then develop the discipline needed to gain wisdom.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Forever learning throughout life and it all starts when we are young and every journey is different and our knowledge diverse and interesting, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Forever learning throughout life and it all starts when we are young and every journey is different and our knowledge diverse and interesting, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Beautiful artwork you've chosen to accomadate your 2-10-2 poem, and your opening word -wonder- goes perfectly with this little cuties expression. We all hope to gain some wisdom along our journey, some are more successful at that than others lol,
lovely presentation.
cheers
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Beautiful artwork you've chosen to accomadate your 2-10-2 poem, and your opening word -wonder- goes perfectly with this little cuties expression. We all hope to gain some wisdom along our journey, some are more successful at that than others lol,
lovely presentation.
cheers
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Valda.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This short little one is both clever and true. It is a nice quotation which fits the contest criteria very well. The image you selected was also a good choice. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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This short little one is both clever and true. It is a nice quotation which fits the contest criteria very well. The image you selected was also a good choice. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, the picture is a great pairing, and your words give readers much to think about. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, the picture is a great pairing, and your words give readers much to think about. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wonder is but the first step on life's journey toward wisdom is a close paraphrase of the spiritual expression "the wonder of life is in the first step." Well structured--WW alliteration. Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Wonder is but the first step on life's journey toward wisdom is a close paraphrase of the spiritual expression "the wonder of life is in the first step." Well structured--WW alliteration. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thanks.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are awesome, clear and creative. I found the first
two lines of this poem to flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! I really like the theme of this poem - it was created with wisdom! Hope you had a great day!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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The author's words are awesome, clear and creative. I found the first
two lines of this poem to flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! I really like the theme of this poem - it was created with wisdom! Hope you had a great day!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, after watching my two girls grow in knowledge and wisdom, we've had the privilege of watching our grandchildren doing exactly the same thing, and it's such a blessing to watch God help them to grow, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Oh yes indeed, after watching my two girls grow in knowledge and wisdom, we've had the privilege of watching our grandchildren doing exactly the same thing, and it's such a blessing to watch God help them to grow, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Many thanks for your review, Roy - always good to hear from you!
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Most welcome
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wonder, wisdom this is the first step in journey's path, wonder life is a magic adventure. "Wonder
is but the first step on life's journey t'ward
Wisdom" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Wonder, wisdom this is the first step in journey's path, wonder life is a magic adventure. "Wonder
is but the first step on life's journey t'ward
Wisdom" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your review!
