Open Your Eyes... and Question
And Don't. Ever. Stop.21 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
A life's journey cannot be without wondering, imagining, travelling and questioning. These four columns are all encapsulated in the word experience, and experience in life means getting old and wise. Wisdom gives you the opportunity to live longer. This writing prompt includes all the above-mentioned life's experiences to become in its simple beautiful storyline and is perfectly written throughout its syllables counting and structural format 2-10-2 syllables required by the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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A life's journey cannot be without wondering, imagining, travelling and questioning. These four columns are all encapsulated in the word experience, and experience in life means getting old and wise. Wisdom gives you the opportunity to live longer. This writing prompt includes all the above-mentioned life's experiences to become in its simple beautiful storyline and is perfectly written throughout its syllables counting and structural format 2-10-2 syllables required by the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for stopping in for this awesome review and those wonderful stars, Tony - you always know how to make me smile! ;) :) I apologize for the delay as we are readying our house to sell (trying to 'downsize' but oh my gosh, what a task!!). May you have a wonderful remainder of the week over there, my friend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I thought this was really good. When we're children we begin to wonder about the world around us, and as we think more and learn more about it, our knowledge begins to grow. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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I thought this was really good. When we're children we begin to wonder about the world around us, and as we think more and learn more about it, our knowledge begins to grow. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much for stopping on this one, Jacob -- always good to hear from you over here! ;) Have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from zanya
This is a superb poem for the 2-10-2 contest - not a word or syllable is wasted - all earning their keep !!and the visual is tailor made to illustrate - congrats on your win
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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This is a superb poem for the 2-10-2 contest - not a word or syllable is wasted - all earning their keep !!and the visual is tailor made to illustrate - congrats on your win
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Zanya -- always good to hear from you over here, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from w.j.debi
What sage advice. Once we lose our sense of wonder we lose the zest for life. I say question everything and keep wondering. I know some people find three-year-olds obnoxious but I love the two questions they ask most often:
Why?
What if...?
May we always ask those questions.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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What sage advice. Once we lose our sense of wonder we lose the zest for life. I say question everything and keep wondering. I know some people find three-year-olds obnoxious but I love the two questions they ask most often:
Why?
What if...?
May we always ask those questions.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Too bad too many aren't asking those questions these days, W.J. - sigh. Thanx for such an awesome review -- so appreciate your stopping in!! ;) Yvette
Comment from jaded831
I believe you have a winner here, it says so much in so few words and the picture is perfect. Learning begins with curiosity and develops into wisdom. Your poem is profound and speaks volumes. Great entry.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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I believe you have a winner here, it says so much in so few words and the picture is perfect. Learning begins with curiosity and develops into wisdom. Your poem is profound and speaks volumes. Great entry.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Oh my!! Such a wonderful review!! ;) Thank you, thank you for those shining stars to brighten my morning! Take care out there and have an awesome remainder of the week!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great poem entry for the 2-10-2 writing prompt. This is an entertaining poem of truth and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This is a great poem entry for the 2-10-2 writing prompt. This is an entertaining poem of truth and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-10-2, Open Your Eyes and Question, has the right set up and takes us back to our earliest quests to understand our environment.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This 2-10-2, Open Your Eyes and Question, has the right set up and takes us back to our earliest quests to understand our environment.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for the review!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is excellent from start to finish. It is very clever to pick amongst the nouns that would be appropriate for a very young person, and comare them to nouns take from maturity.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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This is excellent from start to finish. It is very clever to pick amongst the nouns that would be appropriate for a very young person, and comare them to nouns take from maturity.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for the review - have a wonderful Wednesday!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-10-2 poem the innocence and curiosity of young children is something wonderful to watch and the questions never end while their wisdom in life grows.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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A very well-written 2-10-2 poem the innocence and curiosity of young children is something wonderful to watch and the questions never end while their wisdom in life grows.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your review. 8-)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Open Your Eyes... and Question
Hello my friend
Ah, the wonder of a child. Nice entry for the
2-10-2 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Open Your Eyes... and Question
Hello my friend
Ah, the wonder of a child. Nice entry for the
2-10-2 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your review.
