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The Young Among Us

Something to think about to help young writers.

17 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written tribute to the youngest members on FanStory that have promising talent and at their young age they can practice their skills and talents for many years to come.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020


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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Great idea! We were probably encouraged along the way by others, and it would behoove us to pass those blessings and encourage along to the next generation. Great!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020


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Comment from sibhus
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Well. it's always good to see young writers on the site. I will keep them in mind when reviewing and try to encourage them in their writing. Thanks for the heads up, and for sharing this.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020


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Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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Thank you so much, Pat, for this wonderful tip. I so agree with you. Like you, I belong to the older generation (79) and, as I have noticed, many of our peers on FanStory are older. It is a pleasure to see that also the young are writing and learning to write poetry. I will certainly support them.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020


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reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 25-Jun-2020
    welcome
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This three-paragraph announcement has a welcoming tone to it. It sounds as if you have a love for young people and encouraging their talents. Thank you for pointing out two relatively new and young fanstory.com members. Nice share.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020


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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Hi Pat, thank you for mentoring the new young writers on our Fan Story, is nice to know that this craft is not dead. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


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Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for encouraging talented, young writers--often their teachers do not have time to do so. FanStorian Ameen786, for example, has two such granddaughters, whose writing he sometimes posts. Here's to talented youth! Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


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Comment from Lucy de Welles
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Thank you, Patricia, for this powerful reminder to mentor as well as be mentored. All helping each other to fly higher. Lovely matching photo to highlight your timely ideas.
Well done!

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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I think we all owe it to the future of the art and FanStory to offer young writers in particular explicit constructive criticism of their work. True, it takes time, true it's hard work, true it's often poorly recognised, but we owe it to them to transmit what all our mentors gave to us at our beginnings. Such help can only promote skills and heap credit on our world.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


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Comment from Teri7
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Thank you for telling us about these new writers on here so we can read, review and encourage them. I am sorry I have not been able to call you. I am having bad headaches again, like when I was diagnosed with MS. I would appreciate your prayers my friend. If you ever want to talk please call me and if I hear or see my phone I will answer you, if not I will call you back. I hope you are doing well! love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Thank you for your nice review.