Daddy
A poem about a loving father.10 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Bednar
A wonderful poetic tribute to a man who has been a wonderful father to you. "with open arms you welcomed me" says it all. I hope he gets to see this poem.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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A wonderful poetic tribute to a man who has been a wonderful father to you. "with open arms you welcomed me" says it all. I hope he gets to see this poem.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review. He is an amazing man.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, descriptive couplets serve as a lovely, sincere tribute to the man who has been your father in every way that truly counts. It is clear to see that you are blessed and that you realize you are.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Your well-written, descriptive couplets serve as a lovely, sincere tribute to the man who has been your father in every way that truly counts. It is clear to see that you are blessed and that you realize you are.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Yes, I do. Thank you for taking the time to read my work.
Comment from w.j.debi
This is the type of "happily ever after" we love to hear about in real life. Your father sounds like an amazing man with a lot of love to share right from the first moment you met.
Best of luck in the contest with this gem.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This is the type of "happily ever after" we love to hear about in real life. Your father sounds like an amazing man with a lot of love to share right from the first moment you met.
Best of luck in the contest with this gem.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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He is a wonderful man. Thank you so much.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This pays a tribute to your loving father who adopted you and raised you like his own loving son; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Wish you good luck in the Contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This pays a tribute to your loving father who adopted you and raised you like his own loving son; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Wish you good luck in the Contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work.
Comment from Mistydawn
What a beautifully written poem. It's so warm, heartfelt. I could feel the love, the admiration you have for your father on every line. It takes a special man to do what he did. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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What a beautifully written poem. It's so warm, heartfelt. I could feel the love, the admiration you have for your father on every line. It takes a special man to do what he did. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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It does indeed and I was and am so lucky to have him.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Father's Day Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Father's Day Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Sounds like you love your Daddy. That's what I called my father also. Well actually he was my stepfather, my Dad died when I was 5. I really didn't remember him, my mother kept him alive with stories of him. She said he was so proud of me and all my life I wished he hadn't died. Life has many ups and downs, and his death was a down.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Sounds like you love your Daddy. That's what I called my father also. Well actually he was my stepfather, my Dad died when I was 5. I really didn't remember him, my mother kept him alive with stories of him. She said he was so proud of me and all my life I wished he hadn't died. Life has many ups and downs, and his death was a down.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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I do love him very much. I am sorry that you had to lose him, but happy you had someone who took on the role.
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice poem about a father. It's a good entry for this competition. I do have one recommendation though. Your poem refers sometimes to your father as 'you' and sometimes as 'he'. I would choose one or the other just to be consistant.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This is a very nice poem about a father. It's a good entry for this competition. I do have one recommendation though. Your poem refers sometimes to your father as 'you' and sometimes as 'he'. I would choose one or the other just to be consistant.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your suggestion. I will look into that.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is a very clever and creative poem with a lovely photo accompanying it. The rhyming is pretty good and the syllable count is consistent. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This is a very clever and creative poem with a lovely photo accompanying it. The rhyming is pretty good and the syllable count is consistent. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from jaded831
Great tribute, you made your father proud. If you are any reflection of him, he must be a great man, he has to be worthy for that love. If that is a picture of him, he is a handsome man.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Great tribute, you made your father proud. If you are any reflection of him, he must be a great man, he has to be worthy for that love. If that is a picture of him, he is a handsome man.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Yes that is a picture of my father. He is amazing. Thank you for your review.
