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Heartfelt Poetry
3 total reviews
Comment from
Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, Ricky. This is a beautiful heartfelt poem you've penned. I'm so sorry to hear about your son's accident. Father's Day is a difficult time for ones with loss. Take care of yourself and enjoy your week. ~Kerry
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
Thanks Kerry.
Your so sweet.
Ricky
Comment from
Iza Deleanu
Your poem it's a promise of eternal love, unbroken like the faith, a love that will keep the spirit up and still see good around you, despite it's tragedy. "You're always with me.'
"Heart of My *Heart"' Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
Comment from
AJ McCall
Aww... this is a lovely poem. It flows very well. I feel for you and your family. I hope you are doing well during these times. I hope your son is well.
He has no idea what you've just written about him. This a powerful, emotional poem that has touched my heart.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
The idea of the human heart besides emotions is to continuance of life.
to touch somebody's heart as if to massage it and make them feel it in her soul as a gift.
Thanks,
Ricky
reply by AJ McCall on 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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