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"Written with All My Heart"

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Heartfelt Poetry

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Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Hello there, Ricky. This is a beautiful heartfelt poem you've penned. I'm so sorry to hear about your son's accident. Father's Day is a difficult time for ones with loss. Take care of yourself and enjoy your week. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Thanks Kerry.
    Your so sweet.
    Ricky
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Your poem it's a promise of eternal love, unbroken like the faith, a love that will keep the spirit up and still see good around you, despite it's tragedy. "You're always with me.'
"Heart of My *Heart"' Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Thanks again Iza.
    Ricky
Comment from AJ McCall
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Aww... this is a lovely poem. It flows very well. I feel for you and your family. I hope you are doing well during these times. I hope your son is well.

He has no idea what you've just written about him. This a powerful, emotional poem that has touched my heart.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    The idea of the human heart besides emotions is to continuance of life.
    to touch somebody's heart as if to massage it and make them feel it in her soul as a gift.
    Thanks,
    Ricky
reply by AJ McCall on 24-Jun-2020
    You're welcome
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020